Cut me

Cutting,  Splicing. Wrists,  Twist.  I cut my self,  To keep my heart on its proper shelf  If I do this,  Nothing goes amiss.  I keep things inside,  Long ago the love inside me died.  My emotions shown are few.  I will pay my dues. Make everyone think I’m fine. Make them feel I’m fine. I watch the blood flow from my veins. I stay locked away,  In my cell, in my chains. All I see is darkness, I know no day. I shed no tears,  I show no fears.  I've done this for years. I am an actress. Showing no distress. My life is a stage, The spotlight, tis a deathly cage. I don’t let them see  I’m a mess. I show them what they want to see. I cut, So what? Who cares? Who would dare? No one. I am alone.

Reviews

[stars are far]

you are really talented and nice writings O.o

[Numb]

My gosh.
This poem had so much emotion. About every line had something drawing me even more into the poem and I was actually sad for two reasons:
1. The things the poor person in the poem went through, that they think that way.
2. The last stanza was the LAST stanza. The poem was over.

Every stanza I read as emitting powerful vibes... I truly loved it. [:

+N+

[Samantha Young]

OMG, i loved this. I don't usually like poetry, but this one was amazing. Great job!

[a_mystery]

I show them what they want to see.
"I cut,
So what?
Who cares?
Who would dare?
No one.
I am alone."

revealed everything.. loved to read the poem..

[TTBoy28]

What can I say...WOW! So much emotion. So much pain. "I am an actress. Showing no distress." I love that!!

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

*claps obnoixiously* this is so great kyle!!
and so relatable, I loved the line "I cut, so what?"
Genious. :D

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this one...I would agree. I always feel alone, but really I am not alone. We are all just distressed angels. Thanks for sharing. :()