Just Keep Us In Your Back Pocket [[Track 1]]

So please be fair with me I wrote this at christmastime, and I wrote orgianly on Quizilla, but I wanted to move it so I could finish it. First story on here so be nice : ). It's about a band made up three teenagers on the road for the first time.

Name: Lia Lee Smith
What it is exactaly that she does in the band: She sings lead, plays the bass, and writes most of the songs. Also she pushed the idea of making a band.
Who she is madly in love with: No one. Ever.
Her problem: She'll never admitt how lonely she is. Well at least not unless it's through song.
Looks: Black hair underneth, and blonde on top. Glasses, but they are rarely worn, most of the time she walks around blind. Short, 5'4. And keeps her self in shape, well she would like people to think she does, in realtiy she just has a fast matablism. Some have said she has a hat obbsion, she would like to disagree. To her it's just a slight romance. : )
Name: Lurrie K. Rose
What it is exactaly that she does in the band: She plays the drums. Helps Lia write the songs.
Who she is madly in love with: A guy from another band. He goes by the name of Josh.
Her problem: The crazy that runs in her family may be popping up to take her down.
What she looks like: Brown almost black hair, Glasses, thick rimed. tall, slender, and cruves to kill any guy.
Name: Ryan Jake Merkum
What it is exactaly that he does in the band:He plays the good ol' Guitar : )
Who he is madly in love with: He is prehaps falling for Lia.... ; )
His problem: Lia. She's kind of always been...
What he looks like: Short. 5'5 short guys are always in bands. blondish brownish hair. Glasses, the emo kind of course, because he is a rockstar on the rise.
Name:Josh Urose
What it is exacatly he does in the band: Nothing in Just Keep Us In Your Back Pocket. But in his band he sings.
His problem: Pfft. Like he has any problems. HA! He never has any real problems.
What he looks like: Black and green hair, tall, skinny, basically every teenage girl heartbreak.
 

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"Ok fair enough." Lia threw a dirty look at Lurrie for the change to her lyrics.
"Come on you two! I can't stand lyric fights, there sooo pointless, becasue in the end Lia's going to win" Ryan got a glare tossed his way from Lurrie, but she knew he was right.
"Fine. But if the single suckes remember i wanted to change this one line, and maybe the hit could have been a top seller!" Lurrie smiled feeling like she had won.
"Ok, fine then if it sucks then we can change it, but since it hasnt been proven sucky yet lets leave it as is!" That was the end of. Lurrie knew it was, Lia had won.
"Can we just record the song?!?!" Ryan picked up his guitar as he spoke.
"yessss." Lia and Lurrie whined at the same time. They all went to thier places and began recording, and hour later they had a take they liked. They all left, Lia and Lurrie still not talking, but they would be fine in the morning. Lia and Ryan went to meet with their producer, and Lurrie would meet up with them when she cooled down.
That was the day they found out who they would be going on tour wiht. Public Display of Agression, more commenly known as PDA. But more importantly that ment they would be touring with Josh. A.K.A. Lurries perfect heartbreak.

Author's Note

This is something I write for fun && for friends to read, but none the less I hope you'll enjoy.

Reviews

[Lazzz is twisessed]

Good writing