A world stained by hate

A world filled with darkness

Where the blind lead the insane,

Remains of charred corpses

On display throughout

the cities of the damned

We all have been stained by hate,

Embrace mankinds history

That has been written in blood

Reviews

[Pax]

powerful, it tells how man throughout the ages, as if we are forever stained by our ancestors past mistakes, we keep on repaying the dues, never fully paid... great write my friend...

[Rob Santana]

Yes history seems to be repeating itself these days, sad. Thanks again Pax.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The thin line between love and hate...yet here your theme is for hate...the fallible humans that we are...we continue to be self-destructive in our mentality...only when another entity comes forth to challenge us...do we band as brothers in arms...yet an entity is more intelligent to ever want to make contact with us and keep within a safe distance in light years...as to never make that happen...

[Rob Santana]

Well said Glen. Thanks for stopping by.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[Rene Salinas]

This is great in fact the words are a bit addicting. It is precisely there where the challenge lays. One thing is to feel hate the other to act upon in a hateful manner one may achieve success in pointing something , fighting for something the other will face you and consume you. Really is all crafted in this words. Mankind writing history in blood damn it! As we speak , not even the excuses need hate now they just flow.Facing what consumes you is one way to be free. Released from those poisonous fears.
Resurrected once and for all.

Is that time coming?

Thankyou Rob

[Rob Santana]

Thanks so much for stopping by Rene.

[Baby Ricochet]

Hate's one of the hardest stains to remove

[Rob Santana]

How true that is man.

[Vidya Bacchus]

It is so much easier for some people to hate than to love.And hate and violence just begets more.Times have changed so much from where people gave a damn about each other.Very honest and true write Rob :)

[Rob Santana]

Hate seems to be front and center these days. These are sad times we live in.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Matching Socks]

It grows increasingly difficult to swallow all the BS in the world.
Can't we all just get along? No...

[Rob Santana]

It's in our nature as humans to be destructive. It's so sad but true. History has proven it. :(

[Matching Socks]

The motivation is always the same too more or less. It all boils down to the same root cause generally. I'm staying in my own backyard... :)

[redflutterby]

A world stained by hate...how true. Either people hating each other or hating themselves. Makes one very tired...and sad...

[Rob Santana]

Indeed it does Andrea. I'm already there. Wait I'm tired and hate people so yeah. There, what else can I say.

[Zahra]

Where the blind lead the insane,
awesome line. A deep write. awesome

[Rob Santana]

Thank you much Zahra..

[Frieda P]

Whoa, this one smarts in epic proportions...'blind leading the insane'...seems that way, doesn't it? History repeats itself and we don't learn a damn trick from our past bloody mistakes!

[MOON]

Human beings are one of a kind. Sad but true! Well said!

[Rob Santana]

Thanks for stopping by Moon. Good to see you're still around.