A world stained by hate

A world filled with darkness

Where the blind lead the insane,

Remains of charred corpses

On display throughout

the cities of the damned

We all have been stained by hate,

Embrace mankinds history

That has been written in blood

Reviews

[Amber Lily]

You have a great style! This was the other one I wanted to read so bad. The truth in this is so tangible and real, it makes it seem funny when you step outside in the morning and the world seems bright and friendly. Nope, not the case!

[Rob Santana]

Bingo!!!!!! People are in denial these days with current events. I'm a very alert and observant person. I see a lot going on in the world. Wake up people.......

[Amber Lily]

Same. And if they actually are aware of it they simply choose to ignore the issue and go on with life.

[Rob Santana]

Sad but true.

[Ink Seductress]

Wow, this goes so well with my poem, "Damnation" you should read it some time when you get the chance.
Such a vivid piece you have, I can almost see the smoke and smell the decay; blood bittersweet on my tongue.
Well-penned. I look forward to reading more.

[Rob Santana]

Damn cool review glad you liked it. Gonna check out your poem..

[nafisa]

fierce piece. Your words scream, very powerful.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you. Glad you liked it.

[Harmony]

This poem contains a very vivid imagery of bloodshed and mayhem,which is almost chilling in its poignancy. The words are beautifully chosen and well placed, and flow quite effortlessly, painting a gruesome picture of war-ravaged and disaster-strewn human history! Well done!

[Rob Santana]

This is a sick review Harmony!!! Thank you for stopping by.

[Jeannette Lunete]

It's not provoking it's real. Everything is messed out and sanity seems to take her own root after all. But it doesn't matter. Who needs sanity? Everything astonishing was created by the mad man and skulls full of chaos. However, nothing is as disturbing as letting the world eat you out. So just enjoy the roller coaster and always go for the new chapter. In a nutshell: You did a great job. Props!

[Rob Santana]

Wow strong words you've unleashed. Thank you for stopping by Jeannette.

[Jeannette Lunete]

You're welcome. Keep it up!

[Coyote Poetry]

The world does feel like your words. I hope we can find our sanity before it is too late. Thank you for sharing the thoughts provoking poetry.
Coyote

[Rob Santana]

Coyote thank you for stopping by. I really appreciate your visit.

[Sean M. Addams]

very powerful and thought provoking .. like the detailing your words ..nice job

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much Sean.

[Sean M. Addams]

your welcome

[MsJewel]

Your words are powerful. "We have all been stained by hate" - this line touched me...how true..we have all felt hate in one way or another, or to be hated, or witnessed the distress of hatred. It's a scary world... I was going through a photo album of my mother recently and found pictures of her in the 60's, with flowers in her hair, my brother playing his guitar, my father holding up the peace sign..pure love, no hate..If only..

You are very talented.

:) Julie

[Rob Santana]

I can remember myself when times were easier and less stressful. When did the world make that wrong turn? I don't think anyone was paying attention when that happened. Appreciate your visit Julie.

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very truth . i feel same. i think hate it s one thing one can carry you . when you are feel complete down . it s can provide new hope. and how your hate start change top something more gentle . you can change too.

[Rob Santana]

Well said Anonymous. Thank you for stopping by.

[KWP]

yes funny isn't how we little humans think we are so smart living in some form of civilisation for 5000 years whilst the earth has been here for 500 000 000 years ... we will wipe ourselves out from this planet just like a disease ..... ahhhh but the evolutionary flow will continue on ... without us ... worrying not ...

great reminder of just how daft we are as a race ... x

[Rob Santana]

Very true KWP. Thanks for visiting.

[KWP]

pleasure x