A world stained by hate

A world filled with darkness

Where the blind lead the insane,

Remains of charred corpses

On display throughout

the cities of the damned

We all have been stained by hate,

Embrace mankinds history

That has been written in blood

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Spoken truth, out loud. Greatly expressed.

[Rhia Barton]

Repaying the favour for reviewing one of mine!

I love this, despite it being so short. "Where the blind leave the insane" is awesome. Possibly reminiscent of certain governments right now? Final two lines are so utterly true. Definitely adding this to my library.

[Rob Santana]

I agree, certain government's are guilty of this. Glad you liked this piece. Thank you for stopping by, appreciate it :)

[Gothichorror]

This is too true, sadly!!!

[Rob Santana]

sad indeed, thanks for stopping by.

[Gothichorror]

You are welcome

[Woody]

poignant and true! humanity's reality summed up in eight lines. I often ask myself are we doomed or is there hope in the distant future?
very nicely penned.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much Woody. I often ask myself that very sake question. Current events tell me it's not looking good.

[Layi Tate]

I love this it's filled with so much reality and truth !
#Goyou :)

[Rob Santana]

Sadly it is filled with reality. Thank you for stopping by.

[Layi Tate]

Your welcome I enjoy reading from you .....

[Afraa]

This would have to the most epic poem I have read in a while. I am impressed.

Beautiful job, Rob.

[Rob Santana]

Well thank you very much Afraa, haha.

[KeeD]

At every point in history we meet a chapter of the insane leading the blind.. turmoil and disaster don't fall far behind. Your poem recites the passage of history to its complete terrifying truth that we are a species living in a world of darkness and we never really wanted to turn on the light. This is why I take you as a brother, your poetry is just raw and honest and you never let the demons hide in the background.

[Rob Santana]

Kee I've missed you bro big time. Thanks for stopping by. You are my brother no doubt. Much love and respect.

[ms. barrie]

Very ferocious, profound write...So few words that sadly speaks the truth.
A write that needed to be penned, for your words cut through the
Facade of today's narcissistic society. Just brilliant! Thanks for
Sharing c:

[Rob Santana]

I'm so glad to see you back Barrie, I really missed you. Your words hold so much truth. Thank you glad you enjoyed this one. Keep in touch.

[ms. barrie]

You're very welcome, Rob...I've missed you as well, my friend c:
I look forward to reading more of your writes, and fer sure! P.s.
Regarding this write: this is why I like my Sims more than most ppl...
Or decapating zombies.

[Mahlo Metsys]

In a post apocalyptic world, I hope to see that written on a sign to the entrance of destroyed Los Angeles.

[Rob Santana]

Damn that would be a sight to see. I would admire that right before my head was blown clean off.

[Eleanor]

This is short but tells the sad truth! I really liked this one.
This poem contains a vivid imaginary style.
tells how friendly the world looks. But the truth is bitter. We all are full of hatred.
Bloodshed everywhere.

[Rob Santana]

World painted in blood. It's depressing. Glad you liked this piece.