DOOMED

A failure at all levels

 

But having a desire to achieve

 

Life is torturous,

 

Death is everlasting

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

That's the spirit!! Wait a minute...
What? Snap out of it buddy! It's all that heavy metal you're listening to Rob.
Would you like me to ship you some Celine Dion from Canada?
That'll perk up your spirits. Or maybe just reinforce that life is indeed torturous.

[Rob Santana]

Noooooooooo!!!! Please no Celine Dion!!!! I promise I'll cheer up!!!!!

[Matching Socks]

Lol! I knew that would do the trick...

[Rob Santana]

Yes it did!!! SEEEEEE :D all better!!!! Hahahaha.

[Layi Tate]

I like this I can agree .....

#Piercing

[Rob Santana]

Good I'm not alone, hahaha. Jk Layi, no I'm not LMAO....

[Layi Tate]

No you are not my friend ... lol :p

[Rob Santana]

Hahaha haha awwww s**t, to funny.

[Layi Tate]

I'm laughing ... lol

[Rob Santana]

Hahaha haha hahaha , damn you're to much.

[Layi Tate]

Lol don't even get me started ..... :p

[nafisa]

this piece is beautiful, so touching
Thank you

[Rob Santana]

Muchas gracias Nafisa.

[Rene Salinas]

There are some days.... That lead to some ways... That eventually will push you to a brink there is no question about it, Life is not fair my Mom used to tell me, but at times you can imagine someone arranging the misfortunes towards you. You look up as if there was someone to blame but on that day "everyone has gone out for lunch". There is only one certainty though as your intimate friend passiong and decay wil not leave your aside until your time has come.

Thankyou

[Rob Santana]

Your words have left me in deep thought Rene. I always appreciate your words. Thanks for visiting my friend.

[Caradoc]

This speaks to me.

Excellently written. In this, I would say, there is no failure.

-Cara

[Rob Santana]

Caradoc what's up bro!!! It's been a while man. Well I'm sure you know how the mind can f**k with a person to make you think otherwise...

[Caradoc]

It has been a while, my friend. And I definitely know just how well the mind can f**k with a person.

[Baby Ricochet]

Soldier on Bro.....................

[Rob Santana]

What's up Baby. Thank you man.

[RayXor]

It took me a couple of attempts to find something of yours i like but it was well worth the wait. This one rocks!

[Rob Santana]

Haha. Thank you man I appreciate it. Dig a little deeper you might find one more you like haha.

[RayXor]

i planed on it there are no one hit wonders in poetry

[Rob Santana]

Hey I like that. Right on.

[RayXor]

you welcome to check mine out if you like. be harsh if you must, the first man to learn to swim didn't do it by walking on water

[Rob Santana]

I'll definitely stop by. Thanks for the friend request.

[RayXor]

no problem

[Pax]

a chilling short piece, it makes me view the darker sides of life and its darkest ending...
very expressive piece my friend...

[Rob Santana]

Thank you much Pax. We all endure the darker side of life at least once in our lifetime, especially death.

[KeeD]

Indeed it is, life... ahh where do we even start. Death we're so afraid of but it comes one day and is our only friend in the end.

[Rob Santana]

Indeed it is. Thanks for stopping by Kee.

[Lyn Anderson]

Ouch. A little harsh, but with just the right bite.

[Rob Santana]

Yeah a little bit. (Shruggs shoulders)