SHATTERED IMAGE

Tortured soul

Mirror's so eager

To expose my trangressions

 

My reflection

Bleeds pain and regret,

 

Sin is RED.....

 

Karma, is GOLDEN...

Reviews

[Dawn]

Revealing write in more ways then one! I loved this. Those mirrors they are just trouble ;)

[Rob Santana]

Hahaha, mind if I pass you my mirror? Cuz damn!!!!

[Layi Tate]

Hhahaa! Sure .....

[Layi Tate]

Silencing the mirror is what I'd like to do!
Beautiful

[Eleanor]

You explain everything in just few lines. This needs talent, which you certainly have a lot!
Specially the lines-
"sin is red
Karma is golden"
Great imagery! And a great writing :)

[Rob Santana]

I'm a fan of short pieces, they can be so powerful. Thank you for stopping by. :)

[s y e]

Sometimes we need to cover the mirror so it doesn't show all the pain and regret, so that it doesn't show not only us but others how broken or shattered we are. I really do love the mirror analogy!!

[Rob Santana]

Well said Noodle, I agree. Thank you for stopping by ;)

[KatDarkness]

This is so much expression and power in such a short poem, "Karma is GOLDEN" love it, great imagery :)

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much Kat. I always appreciate your visit.

[OrangeSlice]

It reminds me of pained glass, it reflects but can hold in so much energy. That can never escape unless broken. All the red held within but eventually karma will prevail.

[Rob Santana]

Interesting. Yes, I agree karma always prevails . Thanks for stopping by O.

[OrangeSlice]

The least I could do :)

[Fréyjä Helv..]

You nailed it in just a few lines.

"Sin is RED.....

Karma is GOLDEN..."

love it!

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Princess!!! So happy to see you!!!

[Fréyjä Helvití]

I wonder why I couldn't get any read requests from you.

[Rob Santana]

Because I don't send read request out.

[Fréyjä Helvití]

Well u better send me at least so I don't miss out on your writings. LOL. so happy to see u too...

[Rob Santana]

Missed you so much!!!! My princess

[ms. barrie]

Amazing write Rob...Very compelling, so few words
Speaking profoundly! I agree, I love the last line...
"Karma is golden!" - thanks for sharing :))

[Rob Santana]

Thank you for reading....

[Rob Santana]

Thank you for reading..

[ms. barrie]

You're very welcome :))

[Lyn Anderson]

I love this simple but wonderful concept of colour and its meanings.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you KL.