Prurient

As the moon rises

into the two-toned coloured sky,

the waves begin to take shape,

 

as the angels sing and demons conspire

we walk through the graves

releasing our souls

 

we don't worship,

we refuse to pray,

our scripture, we left at home

 

we get drunk off of each other's lust

 permitting our spirits to become one with the

universe,

 

 aerial creatures wandering

 

moving into a strange phase,

we reminisce on former events

of pain and suffering, love making

 

we no longer ache,

lingering in the clouds

 

we watch demons

become sex fiends

 

I can still feel the lust between us

unable to fornicate

we curse God

 

I swear on the cross

he keeps us celibate

 

I want to touch her again,

I'm ready for our resurrection

 

she'll become your servant

after our sin

 

I swear......

 

I can remember how good it felt to be with you.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Eccentric/experimental, just words I put together...

Reviews

[Layi Tate]

Nice view ... I found myself being able to relate to some things .....

Keep writing your great!

[Rob Santana]

Muchas gracias Layi....

[Layi Tate]

You are very welcome ... ;)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I like the poem it raises the question that do human Angels turn into demons when they get horny.

[Rob Santana]

hahahaha, good question!!!! Unfortunately I don't have the answer. Glad you like it. haha

[Wraith.]

You seems to have ran with a effortless tangent and it flows nicely :3

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Wraith.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh wow...this is really a juxtaposition of "forgive me my sins" and "i want to do them all over again"

love the conflict in this...and the dark imagery...

well done.

jacob

[Rob Santana]

What a great interpretation to this piece! Glad you liked it. Thank you.

[Frieda P]

Wow is that really you Rob? Definitely a different ink from your pen but with that undeniable salacious flair of Creeper's writes. Just the thought alone is insufferable, where did this one ever come from? I love this....outstanding read!

[Rob Santana]

I don't know. Just sitting around and words started popping in my head. Glad you enjoyed it.

[Baby Ricochet]

We got drunk off each others virus. Good line

[Rob Santana]

I like that line too. Thanks Baby...

[Lyn Anderson]

Strange and eccentric? It must be just me, but I do not find this strange or eccentric at all, but I am just a whackadoodle anyway. Two little editing questions 1) it would appear the apostrophe on demon's is unnecessary (And watch the demon's Become sex fiends) -- 2) I am wondering if you meant OUR prurient sin, not ARE? Stop by, I have some MUFFINS and MANURE for you.

[Rob Santana]

LMFAO!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!! Thank you KL I'll make the changes when I get home.

[Lyn Anderson]

Good. That is just the reaction I was going for.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Well, I am pretty excited to see where this creative branching out takes us... I seem to have re-entered at a crucial time, to witness you teetering off the edge of your writing precipice... I enjoyed this dark sensual write and am looking forward to reading more. Well done, Rob!

[Rob Santana]

We'll see where it takes us. Hold on tight K, haha. Thanks for the visit.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

hehe, holding on... :)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Well I can see now many different aspects to this piece that I Didn't before... :P

[KatDarkness]

This is so darkly beautiful! I love this new experimental style, you write it very well :)

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Kat. Glad you liked it.

[xMiss_Psychosis_Phantom..]

I enjoyed this piece from you. A bit of a new twist for you. Continue to practice this. It seems like it will work out if you keep up the practice. Maybe you should

[Rob Santana]

Yeah I'll see what kinda bizarre writings I come up with. Thank you Lady Quill.