Lethal Maze

Lethal Maze

A Poem by Rob Santana
"

mind control

"

Psychological butchers

 

With blood on their hands,

 

Deception has prevailed

 

They search for more lives

 

To devastate

 

Blessing their victims

 

With a comatose existense

 

In a dark hell of dormant misery

 

Enslaved to the psychological butchers

 

Control is no longer mine

 

I am now lost

 

Never to come back to reality

 

I'm trapped,

 

Entombed,

 

Within my own mind

 

I've been mentally butchered

 

Hopelessly searching for exits

 

I've been mentally butchered

 

 

 

 

© 2013 Rob Santana


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A cool read. Their idea of help is doping up their patients with high doses of meds & control, in the books it says to lower the meds when a person has stabilized, but most doctors ignore this, they are as you say "Psychological Butchers". A cool write, nicely done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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If you're not bat s**t crazy already, they'll put you over the cutting edge, there are no little blue pills for mental butchery. Scary thoughts but true.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Exactly why I stay away from these fool's.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow .... again you draw me in and I find myself reflecting .

You defined them correctly ! Lol
I get tired of people trying to do this to me I've been institutionalized more than I can count with 10 fingers this truly takes me to a deeper place of reading ......

Posted 9 Years Ago


I believe Heir Freud considered this a part of The Seven-Per-Cent Solution

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rob Santana

10 Years Ago

Going to have to look that up, ahahahaha. thanks for the read. Sorry for the late reply.
Now what do you see in that picture above? I see two demons fighting over a cockroach hahaha Now I really would be institutionalized if I said that, right? Intense right about mental illness and how it is medically treated these days... fantastic work...xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rob Santana

10 Years Ago

LMAO!!! I see two bears trying to get away from a huge ant!!!! Hahahaha!! Seriously!!!! People are g.. read more
Ghost of Jupiter

10 Years Ago

hahaha Yep you better run when you see the white van pull up... but if they catch you, that is okay .. read more
Rob Santana

10 Years Ago

Hahahaha, sounds good
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I like your style...harsh, blunt and real. Subconscious is our life maze, society is the inflicting virus of slaughtered sheep. Excellent read!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rob Santana

10 Years Ago

I agree, excellent review. Thank you Audrey.
Definitely a favorite. I enjoy your poetry, Rob, written with such honesty and raw emotion. Words are not only read, but felt.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rob Santana

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Traci. I appreciate your visit. I look forward to reading your work.
This is really great, although it is a double edged sword when dealing with mental illness, isn't it?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rob Santana

10 Years Ago

(eye twitching, left shoulder clicking) I think so......
Compelling read, I felt this one, cuts like a dagger and takes no prisoners...outstanding Rob!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rob Santana

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much Frieda.

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