Obliterate

Obliterate

A Poem by Rob Santana
"

I am not a fan of man

"

Without consciousness,

 

I want to  s/u/p/p/r/e/s/s  t/h/e   v/i/r/u/s

 

That dwells here on earth.......

 

 

 

© 2013 Rob Santana


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I couldn't agree with you more...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Layi Tate

10 Years Ago

Why in fear of scaring me away ..... LOL Not possible!!!
Rob Santana

10 Years Ago

Of course not hahaha
Layi Tate

10 Years Ago

;) I'm addicted I think lol
You might have this I hate people exterior but inside we know you're a big softie haha.. much love brother you're one of the first friends I made on here and one of the best. Sweet piece, short powerful with a whole punch of KABOOM.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha what are you smokin hon?
Rob Santana

10 Years Ago

No I remember now, you and I were talking about a writing of mine and I said something about maybe I.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Hahaha, too late, Zio Antonio is on his way....................
Ha. I love people who don't love people. Umm, no, I hate you, hate you all!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rob Santana

10 Years Ago

LMAO!!!!! I like you already KL!!!!!! No wait I hate you!!! Hahaha
Ha you need an attitude adjustment luv...me too. There are a lot of asshats out there. Love the word 'obliterate' it conjures up so much in the mind. Short and succinct.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rob Santana

10 Years Ago

I just don't like people. But yeah you're probably right, I'm due for a major tune up. (Smiles)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

My list grows exponentially every day, if I weren't allergic to cats, I'd dye my hair purple and bec.. read more
"Without consciousness"

I love this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading.
I sense much misanthropy in this one; it is the second piece that is of the opinion people are terrible I've come across today. And while this is short, it gets the point across extremely well.

To a certain extent I agree. Humans are one of the worst viruses on this planet. And yet, here in there, scattered and hidden within the much, are gems of the highest quality. There are some truly decent people out there. It's a shame they are not more common.

On the other hand, with all the bullshit going in around the world, I totally get it. Sometimes I'd like to suppress me too. You have to wonder sometimes; if God is real, why hasn't he hit the reset button already?

This is a powerful write. The only thing I can offer is the hope that someday soon someone comes along and instils a change in you, so that your subconscious no longer wishes to obliterate everyone. Nice choice of title and picture by the way.

Well done.

-Caradoc

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

I too believe that there are a few good people left here on earth. That's all I have to say about th.. read more
Caradoc

11 Years Ago

You're welcome. I hope you have a good one.
Yikes, it takes a lot to stop a virus as most remedies do not wipe them out.......at times, most unfortunate!
Look for a speck of good in mankind - it is there!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Yes there are a few left.

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Added on November 18, 2013
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