FROZEN MOMENT

struggling

Stress has left me empty

 

 

 It's weight was too heavy

 

 

 My leeve has been broken

Reviews

[Layi Tate]

Ah stress .....
always constant & relentless ......
(Hugs) my friend .

[Rob Santana]

Damn what's up stranger, wondering where you were at.

[Layi Tate]

Sorry long story ...... I just messaged you

[Ghost of Jupiter]

yep...singing my life tune there...perhaps blissful dreams await in the future... off on a distant coast line? On foreign soil, immersed in cultural and historical beauty? Somewhere, sometime...just perhaps.

[Rob Santana]

I like the coast line. Meet me there?

[Ghost of Jupiter]

hahaha... yeah be there in 8 years

[Mockingbird]

i can relate to being under stress. sounds like stress got the better of the person.

[Rob Santana]

Indeed it has. Thank you for the read MB.

[Annie]

Every time I read one of your comments, I read it in a yelling voice because of your profile picture, hahaha. :D

Wonderful piece

[Rob Santana]

Haha, to funny!! I think most of my writings would read/sound better that way, haha. Thanks Annie.

[Muse]

too not "to" sweetie. Ferking stress...it wrecks havoc on all of us.

[Rob Santana]

hahaha, thank you Muse!!!!! I can always count on you for corrections. Oh by the way, where's that TAXIDERMY piece????? Huh?????????????????

[Muse]

blurb....blub...blah....yeah I know. I will give it another look, try to post it before Halloween. Deal?

[Rob Santana]

That's one to many blah blahs Muse!!! Hahaha. Yea yea yea we'll see.

[MikeV]

I felt like that a lot! :)
Nice write man

[Rob Santana]

I'm sure many do. Thanks for the read and friend request...

[Enid Blake]

Feeling the weight of too many burdens is a terrible load to bear. A feeling many can empathise with. The short sharp form of the poem emphasises the helplessness. We must struggle on, the load has to get lighter.

[Rob Santana]

Thanks for the comforting comment.

[KatDarkness]

I think everyone can relate to this, great writing, short and to-the-point.

[Rob Santana]

I'm positive everyone can relate. Hop you are well Kat.

[Dye]

Stress can feel that way my friend. Unfortunately you jut need to ride out the wave until it passes and that is much easier said than done. I'm sending positive thoughts your way and truly hope that all goes smoothly for you sooner rather than later. ( :

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Dye, I truly appreciate that.

[Sheila Kline]

Take one step at a time, one second at a time, one breath at a time.....let the ice thaw very, very slowly and eventually it will be gone as troubles flow away with it!
Stress is horrible..........not an easy thing to deal with - especially when different personalities are struggling to be dominant!

[Rob Santana]

I will do that Sheila. Thank you for the support and advice. I truly appreciate it.