GRIND ME INTO OBLIVION

GRIND ME INTO OBLIVION

A Poem by Rob Santana
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LYRICS

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My anger!! Hatred!!

Echoes!! Vibrates!!

 

Nuclear blast

 

OBLIVION!!!

 

Sound waves of destruction

Retaliation, Vicious

Life stabs me in the back

 

Karma rolling back on me

 

 

ACCEPTANCE!!!

 

DELIVERANCE!!!

 

UNFULFILLED!!!

 

Screaming through the vortex

Tossed into limbo

Ghost writing while walking

Success at hand, which one??

 

OBLIVION!!!

 

No guidance

No glory

 

Useless pulling and pushing

Nothing on THEE other side

 

The great DECIEVER knights me

Hereditary failure

Innocence, pulverized

 

Questions???

My answers RULE!!!

 

Violence enslaves me

Blackened thoughts

I scorch the two-faced Snake

 

Crack the shell

Release the wretched spawn

Abuse, reality

 

CONTRADICTION!!!

 

Untouchable spirit

 

Alive in my fleshly tomb

My rage extends beyond the sun

 

GRIND ME INTO OBLIVION!!!

© 2013 Rob Santana


Author's Note

Rob Santana
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has many possible explanations...but the rage really comes through...it pounds at us...like a really loud footstep...like a tyrannosaurus rex's feet hitting the ground as it nears us..

we are so messed up in the world today, we are going to eat ourselves...

we destroy earth, others and us all in one big bite..

pound, pound, pound, pound...coming closer.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Jacob I agree with you, there is change in the air. Destruction lies ahead.
i sense a slight malcontent with the order of things in the universe and man's blundering presence on this unfortunate planet. when i read creeper i usually know to expect something...well....creepy. this is just downright brilliant! well done, Rob, may the farce be with you!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

hahaha, Quinn thank you brother. You know where to come when you need a creepy fix, hahaha.
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

that, i do, my friend....that, i do!
Great lyrics on this one, felt the darkness, and the horror that these lyrics provide, great job

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thanks Nick B I really appreciate your visit..
Holy, I feel this ripping my skin apart Rob...we share in this one, you've successfully pen'd the words I've wanted to SCREAM my entire life. To say this was affecting is a huge understatement....! Good on you, keep purging my dear friend. x

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I feel you Rob, I know how it is when they more or less pen themselves, it's good to get it all out .. read more
Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thanks, much Love Frieda....always.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

xo
I was all clenching my teeth and pounding my fist reading this, hitting on the key words, just sort of death metal singing in my head, probably not even close to the tune you have in mind, but it was like a pounding, driving, guttural raging rasping screaming GROWL you know? Like that...yeah man...exactly like that.

F*****g nailed it, baby!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Make it a dirty martini big mouth, better be top shelf too! ;-)
Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

hahahaha, you got it Frieda!!
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Make it a double please, I need it!
These get better every time.
I love your wording in this one. All your stanzas stand up and out on their own. Very quick and clever. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thank you Rogue :)

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