This could be easily put to music. Of course, it would have to be speed metal. Nothing else would give the lyrics the impact they so truly deserve. I think PANTERA or MUDVAYNE would do a damn good song with these. Give 'em a call, tell them DK sent you ;)
Some darkly delectable wickedness going on inside that head of yours, 'ey CREEPER?
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks Dean, yes the wickedness in my head never sleeps. I actually been seeking out bands looking f.. read moreThanks Dean, yes the wickedness in my head never sleeps. I actually been seeking out bands looking for some lyrics. Nothing yet, so what I'm doing now is working with some friends creating music so I can put my vocals to these lyrics. My firend has a home studio so we's working hard!!!
Keep working ay it, you'll get there. If you can picture it in your head, you can do it in your life.. read moreKeep working ay it, you'll get there. If you can picture it in your head, you can do it in your life.
11 Years Ago
What a great last sentence. Words of wisdom for me....I'm taking your words and manifesting them, ch.. read moreWhat a great last sentence. Words of wisdom for me....I'm taking your words and manifesting them, check out my status bar...
You wrote this? that's just heavy. I can feel the madness spewing through this. It's cool... nice job. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
That's it Princess, just cool???? I'm so hurt, insulted.....hahahaha JK!! I'm actually in the studio.. read moreThat's it Princess, just cool???? I'm so hurt, insulted.....hahahaha JK!! I'm actually in the studio right now creating a track with a musician friend of mine, so I can put my vocals too these lyrics!!!! SERIOUSLY!!!
Geez creeper. You know I love you and this is heavy s**t! All of your works that I've read are. LOL... read moreGeez creeper. You know I love you and this is heavy s**t! All of your works that I've read are. LOL. Let me hear when you're done with the song...
11 Years Ago
I'm jus kidding, you will be the first to hear it, I promise!!!!!!
I see this as spoken word, hands balled in fists, standing on your toes. I think this is a fantastic call to be finally heard or wrath be had by those who do not listen. I enjoyed the darkness of this piece. Well done Creeper
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
H.M. how are you!!!!! Long time no see!!! Thank you very much, for stopping by. Hope you are well..
Well tell me how you really feel lol. This was RAW and angry and amazing and creative and I loved it! I love poets who are not afraid to express whatever's on their heart no matter how sick, disturbing, dark, bright, lovey, corny, etc it is. Great stuff
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Hahaha, thank you Emmie. No one should be afraid of speaking or writing what they feel.
Holy! F**k! this is amazingly darkly, scathingly delicious. i was going to take a break from reviewing tonight, but then i caught this on on live feed, definitely not disappointed!
--- Nuclear blast!!
Sound waves of destruction
The retaliation is vicious
Life, strife
Stab me in the back with that knife
Karma, rolling back on me
Quickly down that hill
ACCEPTANCE
DELIVERANCE
UNFULFILLED
Grab the bull by it's horns
Tossed into limbo
Ghost writing while walking
Success at hand, which one??---
i want to hear these lyrics being screamed out, esp. those lyrics. i can imagine
this would make one's ears bleed...just listening to these lyrics,let alone the music
accompanying it. brilliant write, CREEPER, thanks for sharing :) 100 to 100!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you very much BarrieJoy!!!!
11 Years Ago
you're very welcome! do you have any music *just out of curiousity* in mind to accompany this? 'caus.. read moreyou're very welcome! do you have any music *just out of curiousity* in mind to accompany this? 'cause these are incredible lyrics :)
11 Years Ago
I actually do. It would be slow heavy guitars riffs, well s**t all the music slow lyrics sung slow a.. read moreI actually do. It would be slow heavy guitars riffs, well s**t all the music slow lyrics sung slow as well. I working on putting music to all my lyrics that I have here. Coming real soon..... I plan on doing all vocals. Jus gotta make my way to my friends house to record.
you're lucky, i have to use "others people's music" instrumental songs/covers cause i cannot sing, p.. read moreyou're lucky, i have to use "others people's music" instrumental songs/covers cause i cannot sing, play an instrument, the only thing i do when i have much needed solitude is drum on the computer desk (try to) as hard as i can to metal. oh yes, Devil's Tritone perhaps? can't wait to hear/listen to the accompanying music you have for this...actually, i picture these lyrics being growled out lol. PM me when you upload the music for this if you want. i'm sure it's amazing :)