GRIND ME INTO OBLIVION

GRIND ME INTO OBLIVION

A Poem by Rob Santana
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LYRICS

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My anger!! Hatred!!

Echoes!! Vibrates!!

 

Nuclear blast

 

OBLIVION!!!

 

Sound waves of destruction

Retaliation, Vicious

Life stabs me in the back

 

Karma rolling back on me

 

 

ACCEPTANCE!!!

 

DELIVERANCE!!!

 

UNFULFILLED!!!

 

Screaming through the vortex

Tossed into limbo

Ghost writing while walking

Success at hand, which one??

 

OBLIVION!!!

 

No guidance

No glory

 

Useless pulling and pushing

Nothing on THEE other side

 

The great DECIEVER knights me

Hereditary failure

Innocence, pulverized

 

Questions???

My answers RULE!!!

 

Violence enslaves me

Blackened thoughts

I scorch the two-faced Snake

 

Crack the shell

Release the wretched spawn

Abuse, reality

 

CONTRADICTION!!!

 

Untouchable spirit

 

Alive in my fleshly tomb

My rage extends beyond the sun

 

GRIND ME INTO OBLIVION!!!

© 2013 Rob Santana


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The voice inside you is a powerful one. You are a great dark writing poet Creeper. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Lovely..
This could be easily put to music. Of course, it would have to be speed metal. Nothing else would give the lyrics the impact they so truly deserve. I think PANTERA or MUDVAYNE would do a damn good song with these. Give 'em a call, tell them DK sent you ;)

Some darkly delectable wickedness going on inside that head of yours, 'ey CREEPER?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dean Kuch®

11 Years Ago

Keep working ay it, you'll get there. If you can picture it in your head, you can do it in your life.. read more
Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

What a great last sentence. Words of wisdom for me....I'm taking your words and manifesting them, ch.. read more
Dean Kuch®

11 Years Ago

Thank you CREEPER! I am honored...
You wrote this? that's just heavy. I can feel the madness spewing through this. It's cool... nice job. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Fréyjä Helvití

11 Years Ago

Geez creeper. You know I love you and this is heavy s**t! All of your works that I've read are. LOL... read more
Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

I'm jus kidding, you will be the first to hear it, I promise!!!!!!
Fréyjä Helvití

11 Years Ago

cool. can't wait. :)
I see this as spoken word, hands balled in fists, standing on your toes. I think this is a fantastic call to be finally heard or wrath be had by those who do not listen. I enjoyed the darkness of this piece. Well done Creeper

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

H.M. how are you!!!!! Long time no see!!! Thank you very much, for stopping by. Hope you are well..
Cool. Intense cool crafted lyrics of a darkness and thoughts creatively weaved.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Eric Cox

11 Years Ago

Cool. Wish I could create music for my lyrics. I'd like to hear yours.
Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

I will share them with you when their all recorded..
Eric Cox

11 Years Ago

Cool!!!
This is dark! Great imagery! Thanks for sharing Creeper

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thanks Dunne..
Mr Dunne Poetry

11 Years Ago

Np :)
Questions???

My answers RULE!!!

Favorite Line! lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

hahahaha, cool.
Well tell me how you really feel lol. This was RAW and angry and amazing and creative and I loved it! I love poets who are not afraid to express whatever's on their heart no matter how sick, disturbing, dark, bright, lovey, corny, etc it is. Great stuff

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Hahaha, thank you Emmie. No one should be afraid of speaking or writing what they feel.
EMMIE

11 Years Ago

Damn right
Holy! F**k! this is amazingly darkly, scathingly delicious. i was going to take a break from reviewing tonight, but then i caught this on on live feed, definitely not disappointed!

--- Nuclear blast!!
Sound waves of destruction
The retaliation is vicious
Life, strife
Stab me in the back with that knife

Karma, rolling back on me
Quickly down that hill

ACCEPTANCE

DELIVERANCE

UNFULFILLED

Grab the bull by it's horns
Tossed into limbo
Ghost writing while walking
Success at hand, which one??---

i want to hear these lyrics being screamed out, esp. those lyrics. i can imagine
this would make one's ears bleed...just listening to these lyrics,let alone the music
accompanying it. brilliant write, CREEPER, thanks for sharing :) 100 to 100!

Posted 11 Years Ago


ms. barrie

11 Years Ago

you're lucky, i have to use "others people's music" instrumental songs/covers cause i cannot sing, p.. read more
Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

I will let you kno for sure!
ms. barrie

11 Years Ago

great, thanks, CREEPER! :)
very dark, love it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thanks Kat.

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