GRIND ME INTO OBLIVION

GRIND ME INTO OBLIVION

A Poem by Rob Santana
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LYRICS

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My anger!! Hatred!!

Echoes!! Vibrates!!

 

Nuclear blast

 

OBLIVION!!!

 

Sound waves of destruction

Retaliation, Vicious

Life stabs me in the back

 

Karma rolling back on me

 

 

ACCEPTANCE!!!

 

DELIVERANCE!!!

 

UNFULFILLED!!!

 

Screaming through the vortex

Tossed into limbo

Ghost writing while walking

Success at hand, which one??

 

OBLIVION!!!

 

No guidance

No glory

 

Useless pulling and pushing

Nothing on THEE other side

 

The great DECIEVER knights me

Hereditary failure

Innocence, pulverized

 

Questions???

My answers RULE!!!

 

Violence enslaves me

Blackened thoughts

I scorch the two-faced Snake

 

Crack the shell

Release the wretched spawn

Abuse, reality

 

CONTRADICTION!!!

 

Untouchable spirit

 

Alive in my fleshly tomb

My rage extends beyond the sun

 

GRIND ME INTO OBLIVION!!!

© 2013 Rob Santana


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I WOULD LISTEN TO THEM!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Rob Santana

9 Years Ago

I've been trying to put music to many of my lyric pieces. Lazy musician friends. Hate them. Nah, hah.. read more
Layi Tate

9 Years Ago

Lol I totally get it ;)
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Do you have this to music somewhere?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Not yet. Still working on it along with my other lyrics I have written. It's a long creative process.. read more
Wow , what an impact this makes as you read it. Its dark and intense with much emotion. I love it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thanks Kourtney, glad you liked it.
Powerful write full of raw emotion dripping from the blood of your pen.. shallimarRose

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Shallimar.
I love the fact that you can say so much with so few words. Nothing wasted - high intensity poetry. Would so easily lend itself to a driving beat or what we used to call "power chords" but also - to a single voice with a staccato effect in the background - it could be full on or controlled tension. It would work either way. I especially liked those last few lines.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Glad you liked it TL.
Intense, vicious and overwhelming.
Beautiful!

-Bliss

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
overwhelming and grandiose, it's a pleasure to see a short poem create so much space within itself

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
Wow. This gives off very intense emotions. You are an amazing writer!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Alexa!!! This weekend I'm going to do alot of reading here, I promise I will read .. read more
Crack my skull and put my hand in a blender! Is it just me...or are you getting scarier by the minute? I got a challenge for you...use pretty words...and make it evil...I want to see you broaden your vocabulary...I don't know why...but I want to see what your mind can do to a flower...a garden....a lullably. Take our pretty false reailty and make it a nightmare full of screams.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Muse

11 Years Ago

deal...errrghh...that piece has given me a headache...perhaps I need to go with a headache theme..I .. read more
Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Hey why didn't you tell me I was missing the letter "I" in vicious??? I already fixed it. Are you sl.. read more
Muse

11 Years Ago

I am...my OCD and my grammar is slipping...spelling too...my spellchecker is broke I think.
Some pretty awesome lyrics you've got here my friend (personally it was weird reading them while I'm listening to a sad song, sung in Japanese, but that's my fault).
They definitely come from within you, that's for sure, and it must have been screaming to get out because it ended up being something magnificent. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Felecia.

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