Venomous potions

Under the influence

I can feel this dark potion

Slithering through my system

Burning my innards,

My mind opens

To dark thoughts of violence and lust

I'm Tempted to take a hit of angel dust,

More of the venomous potion enters my body

Thrusting my mind into a black hole

Illusions of fearlessness falsely empowering me

I'm feeling colossus, nephilim like

Demons slowly creeping up on me

Waiting for the right moment to plunge into my soul

I've opened myself up to possession....self destruction

My demons breed......

Reviews

[♪Barklight♪]

Now this is why i refuse to drink

[Rob Santana]

Hahaha, good for you!!!

[Frieda P]

Now, this one explains a lot....

[Rob Santana]

haha, this piece came to life lastnight, damn!! ruff night. But it was fun..

[Frieda P]

Still feeling collosus? colossus? ;-)

[Rob Santana]

no feeling like a dried up corpse!!!!

[Frieda P]

hair of the dog?

[Elvis Gilley]

Deep rooted fears come to mind. I thought it was artful.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Elvis.

[Jack Reaper]

wow, really caught the vulnerablity and depression behind being drunk. reminds me of the nights when you drink alone to try to escape and it just pulls you down and makes it worse. i love your work, but this one might be standing on top, its much deeper than the violent metal inspired stuff im used to seeing from you. just damn man, damn.

[Rob Santana]

I'm familiar with those solo nights of drinking, haha so true!!! Thank you Jack.

[Chidoriflower]

Honestly, I've never been drunk before, but you bring out the dark insecurity of it all. The images are splendidly chilling.

[Rob Santana]

Good, never do it, hahaha. Seriously you really can get possessed. When a person is drunk they are vulnerable. Thank you for your comment.

[Chidoriflower]

You're welcome.

[AWickedMoon]

Honesty I can't say I know the feeling of being under the influence, as I’ve never been drunk. I do enjoy a glass of whisky and my pornstars(

[Rob Santana]

Hahaha good for you, haha

[AWickedMoon]

Sorry it cut half my comment off! Grrr. But as I drink whiskey and tequila I do know the burn you speak of. I really enjoyed this poem though loved the line “To dark thoughts of violence and lust.” –awickedmoon

[Muse]

I've studied up on some of this...opiums..liquor...they are gateways for demon posession...but only if we abuse it. Everything can become a poison if not used in moderation.

[Rob Santana]

Damn! I knew it. So many years of abusing drugs and booze. I still drink but like when I was younger. I could only imagine how many demons have possessed me.

[Muse]

possibly...yes.

[Raven Starhawk]

Although I am allergic to alcohol when I was younger I use to explore the world of Peppermint Schnapps. I sat down to literally guzzle half a bottle. >.> That was a huge mistake, but anyways it did feel like a hot poison coursing through me. And about half an hour later I noticed my body going numb. I couldn't think while playing a game of Resident Evil. My reaction time was slowed down considerably. And then I had no control over my steps and had to crawl. It felt like my body was self-destructing or possessed. But anyways I am babbling. Your poem made me think of that time though. Clearly there is much more here to consider though and I can relate in a deeper way.

[Rob Santana]

Haha I've been there plenty of times in my younger days.

[Souladareatease]

possession of mind is better thing, though many fond memories of Youth...and some I SLIGHTLY recall adventurous lol
Great and horrific write creeper!!!

[Rob Santana]

Thank you, thank you, hahaha