Spiritual Autopsy

G.O.O.D. V.S. E.V.I.L. (acrostic write #1) possible lyrics

Gathering  together  the  chosen  ones

Organizing  the  two  faced  holy  nuns

Oracles  regurgitating  obscene  incantations

Death  with  it's  final  cancellation

 

Venomous  words  invade  my  subconscious

Salvation, worship, obey or die

 

Erupting  with  dire  aggression eyes  filled  with  fire

Violent  images  received  through  voodoo  voyages

Insane  idolaters  performing  a  spiritual  autopsy

Lucifer  pens  my  obituary….”He was spiritually weak”

 

Author's Note

Good vs Evil, me against both...

Reviews

[elastagirl]

wow this was amazing very dark. i loved it darkness can be a great catalyst

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much

[Sam Gregory]

Very dark, me like haha. I like this type of poem tbh, and I like how u penned this. ur vocabulary is good too, I really like that chosen ones/holy nuns multisyllabic rhyme too :)

[Rob Santana]

I appreciate your comment thanks insamity.

[Sam Gregory]

Np :)

[Fréyjä Helv..]

This reminded me of this cult movie I just recently watched. Blasphemous and obscene in almost every part of it. You nailed this one...

[Rob Santana]

Muchas gracias Lillith.

[LJW]

My son's the guitar in a heavy metal band These words would be sick as lyrics.

[Rob Santana]

Really? Hhmmmm

[anon]

Beauty of truth. Nicely written

[Rob Santana]

Thank you for your R and R

[AWickedMoon]

Love the imagery, an awesome poem!

[Rob Santana]

Thank you :)

[Frieda P]

This is absolutely epic...I just tried an acrostic for the first time today....your's is brilliant.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much Frieda. Have you posted it up yet? What is it called so I can check it out.

[Frieda P]

Welcome Creeper, it's called Guilt.

[Frieda P]

I'm still in awe over this one.....

[Rob Santana]

Thanks Frieda, This one is one of my favorites.

[Frieda P]

Definitely, mine too.

[Invisible]

you definately put quite a bit into such a small poem. applause my friend.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you, thank you, haha

[Olivia Marie]

The diction is awesome, and it's execution is amazing. One of my new favorites :)

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Olivia

[Eric Cox]

Cool creating. Cool imagery. Nicely done.