Spiritual Autopsy

G.O.O.D. V.S. E.V.I.L. (acrostic write #1) possible lyrics

Gathering  together  the  chosen  ones

Organizing  the  two  faced  holy  nuns

Oracles  regurgitating  obscene  incantations

Death  with  it's  final  cancellation

 

Venomous  words  invade  my  subconscious

Salvation, worship, obey or die

 

Erupting  with  dire  aggression eyes  filled  with  fire

Violent  images  received  through  voodoo  voyages

Insane  idolaters  performing  a  spiritual  autopsy

Lucifer  pens  my  obituary….”He was spiritually weak”

 

Author's Note

Good vs Evil, me against both...

Reviews

[Martin Ramirez]

I loved the vocabulary, it creates great imagery. In every line there's a word that really stands up to me, I liked that. It's very nice; great job.

[Rob Santana]

Thanks for the awesome review Martin.

[That_Girl]

The evil are merely cloaked in good masks... :) Great job.

[Muse]

"They" can only possess a weak vessel. Spirtually weak you say. I couldn't agree more. They jump the bridge because some-one else says it's a one way ticket to bliss. But for some, there's always the weekend confession.

[Rob Santana]

haha,right people get to start over every Sunday.....BULLSHIT.

[KatDarkness]

Epicness
Reminds me of Silent Hill 4 and "Tomb of the Mutilated" mixed together.

[KeeD]

haha wow this was really cool brother.
It started of telling a story of how people would gather together and mourn the death of a lost one, probably a disturbed soul in this case, makes me picture a case of possession where nuns are called over to pray but these nuns all have a lie they conceal which the devil reveals. Oracles called in to drive it out with their spiritual mambo jambo.. They're trying to make you repent, worship obey come back .. or die!...and the ending is great.. you're penned spiritually weak. Lol in like 10 lines you told an entire story. You're amazing.

[Rob Santana]

Haha,damn I knew someone would get it. S**t you really do have a demented mind,haha. I might edit. So what the f**k is this haiku?! I see alot of writers doing it.

[KeeD]

Its a Japanese style of poetry, containing 17 syllables

[KeeD]

haha and yeah man I love your work :P besides Eric Cox you're one of my favorite horror genre poets/writers on here :D

[Rob Santana]

oh!!!! okay, Dude really? Damn thank you Keegan,really thanks. Eric Cox is one of my favorite horror writers here on WC as well. That dude is incredible!!! I was so honored when he joined DARK REALM GROUP..