Spiritual Autopsy

G.O.O.D. V.S. E.V.I.L. (acrostic write #1) possible lyrics

Gathering  together  the  chosen  ones

Organizing  the  two  faced  holy  nuns

Oracles  regurgitating  obscene  incantations

Death  with  it's  final  cancellation

 

Venomous  words  invade  my  subconscious

Salvation, worship, obey or die

 

Erupting  with  dire  aggression eyes  filled  with  fire

Violent  images  received  through  voodoo  voyages

Insane  idolaters  performing  a  spiritual  autopsy

Lucifer  pens  my  obituary….”He was spiritually weak”

 

Author's Note

Good vs Evil, me against both...

Reviews

[Jack Reaper]

i dont know how i missed this one.. and it angers me. i love that the acrostic feeds into the title, rather than being the title itself. reminds me of how i write them. in its entirety, its powerful, full of imagery and haunting. but, its the last line that really hit it home, pure brillance. keep it up.

[Rob Santana]

Thanks Jack. For me this has to be one of my favourite writes. This one just came out freely. Probably due to my experiences with religion in the past, haha.

[Nemesis G]

I loved it, I couldn't put more simply. The last line for me "Lucifer pens my obituary "He was spiritually weak." absolutely fantastic and beautifully written. Amazing acrostic for me, thank you for sharing I was blown away by it.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much Nemesis :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

not an easy thing to pull off but you managed it perfectly....

[Rob Santana]

Thank you, Dr. Wood I appreciate that.

[Enid Blake]

Very good acrostic - I love the images in each line.

[Rob Santana]

Thanks Enid.

[Yellow Butterfly]

And you sure delivered.....

Brilliant piece here.... with great rhyme and meter very well crafted... :o)

[Rob Santana]

Thank you :)

[Andie]

I suck at these. ><
Lol, nice job. I like the dark vibe it gives off.

[Rob Santana]

Thanks Amanda. Give it a try.

[Andie]

No problem. Maybe I will. :)

[Lily Mae]

I love your work because it's powerful and raw and mighty wicked.. :)

[Rob Santana]

Thank you so much Lily!

[Judas Hammer]

Wow very deep and very well Penned. deep stuff. I liked this....

[Rob Santana]

Thanks Judas I appreciate your comment.

[Horselvvr]

This is really well written and i like the contrast and how you used the acrostic :)

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much.

[Ars Goetia Poetry]

Wow, this is dark. Excellent imagery and written so well. Well done bro :)

[Rob Santana]

Thanks brother

[Ars Goetia Poetry]

My pleasure :)