Spiritual Autopsy

G.O.O.D. V.S. E.V.I.L. (acrostic write #1) possible lyrics

Gathering  together  the  chosen  ones

Organizing  the  two  faced  holy  nuns

Oracles  regurgitating  obscene  incantations

Death  with  it's  final  cancellation

 

Venomous  words  invade  my  subconscious

Salvation, worship, obey or die

 

Erupting  with  dire  aggression eyes  filled  with  fire

Violent  images  received  through  voodoo  voyages

Insane  idolaters  performing  a  spiritual  autopsy

Lucifer  pens  my  obituary….”He was spiritually weak”

 

Author's Note

Good vs Evil, me against both...

Reviews

[Kourtney G]

I like the concept of a spiritual autopsy , that is a very intriguing. This was neat to read. I like how you spelled out good vs evil and then wrote the poem to each word. Your dark poetry is always delightfully and you make some interesting lines. Your words are used very well too.

Well done.

[Rob Santana]

Acrostic poems are fun to do, it pushes you to work that much harder

[TL Boehm]

Good vs. evil, me against both. Fascinating. I could go off on a tangent but I'll refrain until you know me a little better (wait till you meet the dork side) I think the part that resonated with me was "venomous words invade my subconsious, salvation, worship obey or die.
You seem adept at finding just the right words with no wasted fluff. When I'm not driving nails into the skulls of my victims - I'm sprinkling bits of wispy fluff. Its sad really.

[Rob Santana]

This is one of my favourite pieces that I have written so far. This one came out so natural is was a bit scary, shocking.

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

That last line bro...wow! Great poem :)

[Rob Santana]

Hahaha, seems to be a favourite line of many who read this piece. Thanks Dunne!

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Lol, I just see the others quoted the same line. You're welcome bro. I hope all is well ;)

[Jordan Jones]

You could have done something with the stanzas

[Rob Santana]

What do you mean? Explain

[Jordan Jones]

Only good things in the G. O. O. D. etc

[Rob Santana]

Well I did put "chosen ones, holy nuns and oracles?" Those are kinda good....

[Becky]

Woah. That last line was just... wow. This is great. I agree with whoever else said they didn't like acrostics. They tend to be a little bit shallow, typically. However, this is really brilliantly written. I don't think it's even an acrostic. It's like... the Lord of All Acrosticness.

Okay, I'm too tired for this. Just don't think about it and pretend I made sense.

Great work, honestly. It's quite thought-provoking and tends to reflect what we all (at least I) feel like at times.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Marble for the awesome review! This is one of my favourite pieces that I have written.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

One of the many imaginary characters I like from the Book. Good read and write.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Brandon I appreciate your visit.

[s y e]

Ooooooh, me likey!

I loved it, smart cookie.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you, I like cookies..

[s y e]

Cookies are good, Chocolate ones

[Rob Santana]

om nom nom yeah!!! With a big glass of ice cold milk. I'm a cookie bandit!!! I see cookies and there coming with me, haha.

[s y e]

Haha, not my cookies and ewwwwwie milk!!!! Ewwww

[Rob Santana]

Milk is the best!!! hahaha.

[s y e]

Ewwwwwww

[Rob Santana]

Milk does a body good. Now Noodlehead if you don't drink milk as you start to get older one day your gonna grab your purse and your fingers are gonna break off. hahaha you don't want weak bones do you? haha

[s y e]

Ermmmmmm...... Errrr..... May-...... No! Buuuut, I have strong bones, when I was little I had to drink two cups of milk a day!

[Rob Santana]

hahaha, got you thinking. Well time for some cookies and milk.

[s y e]

You did actually -.- Not cool, have fun! Enjoy!

[Trigorin]

There's nothing wrong with acrostics, but I've personally always felt that they were just such a ham-handed way of getting a point across that I've always disliked them. However, I really like what you've done with this. The last line particularly is notable for the distinct image it conjures up. The tone is well-done and you've definitely made your point. Good work.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much.

[Rob Santana]

LOL, and how good you're! so enjoyed this bro, best from you I read so far, in acrostic.............
Thank you dearly. Yeah, like the f. anger, I had last night too...
Good to meet us again in darker writes, loved this!!! :) brilliant soul!

- Elisita

[Rob Santana]

Gracias Elisa :)

Most welcome. :)

[therisa]

Reading this acrostic, brought back my memories with religious people, who condemned me, for being a transsexual and a lesbian, at the same time. As for your question, you are neither, just a human being trying to live and hopefully thrive.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Therisa.

[therisa]

your welcome.