Spiritual Autopsy

G.O.O.D. V.S. E.V.I.L. (acrostic write #1) possible lyrics

Gathering  together  the  chosen  ones

Organizing  the  two  faced  holy  nuns

Oracles  regurgitating  obscene  incantations

Death  with  it's  final  cancellation

 

Venomous  words  invade  my  subconscious

Salvation, worship, obey or die

 

Erupting  with  dire  aggression eyes  filled  with  fire

Violent  images  received  through  voodoo  voyages

Insane  idolaters  performing  a  spiritual  autopsy

Lucifer  pens  my  obituary….”He was spiritually weak”

 

Author's Note

Good vs Evil, me against both...

Reviews

[Ghost of Jupiter]

you against both...this is a really good piece, R, I loved the ending line...spiritually weak, wow. Great write!

[Rob Santana]

thank you, thank you....haha

[Ghost of Jupiter]

are you taking a bow too? lol

[Rob Santana]

YES I WAS, HAHA

[Lyn Anderson]

This is a very interesting write, with a nice little "twist" at the end.

[Rob Santana]

It's some weird s**t to me ,hahaha.

[bluebutterflyz]

Wow I like this one brother.

[Rob Santana]

This one is my favourite.

[Damien Thibodeaux]

Ooooh, I can feel the darkness. I imagined each line read, one by one, punctuated with a bell ringing before each line was read. Each line a statement standing on it's own merits, neatly tied together as good vs. evil. Loved it man. It seems you've heard Lucifer write an obit before.

[Rob Santana]

Killer visuals you've given me through your review. I imagine it the same way, powerful and passionate. If I don't change my ways, this will be my obituary, signed, sealed and delivered by Satan himself.

[Art Sun]

clever...nice work, this evil versus good tends to be flourishing these days...

[Rob Santana]

Thanks for stopping by Art.

[Dye]

Neither sound like a side to be on. Your last line was killer!!!

"Lucifer pens my obituary...."He was spiritually weak"

That was great! Awesome in fact.

[Rob Santana]

Muchas gracias Dye........

[Dye]

de nada Rob

[Heather]

Creeper! I liked this, very well done Acrostic poem

[Rob Santana]

Hey! H.M. how are you!!!!!! Long time no see!!!! Thanks for visiting ')

[Cody Williams]

Clever work! I really enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing!

-CW

[Rob Santana]

Thanks for the visit Cody...

[Cody Williams]

No problem!

[ms. barrie]

CREEPER, this is outstanding in its scathing, profound venomous darkness
Dripping from your pen. Love the whole concept of this, Spiritual Autopsy,
100 - 100 :)

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much!!!

[Sheila Kline]

The title is a lead in to what becomes an analysis of one's spiritual journey in life........your descriptive phrases leave no doubt as to the final verdict! And a "beyond the grave" acrostic as well!

[Rob Santana]

Thank you much Sheila:)