Spiritual Autopsy

G.O.O.D. V.S. E.V.I.L. (acrostic write #1) possible lyrics

Gathering  together  the  chosen  ones

Organizing  the  two  faced  holy  nuns

Oracles  regurgitating  obscene  incantations

Death  with  it's  final  cancellation

 

Venomous  words  invade  my  subconscious

Salvation, worship, obey or die

 

Erupting  with  dire  aggression eyes  filled  with  fire

Violent  images  received  through  voodoo  voyages

Insane  idolaters  performing  a  spiritual  autopsy

Lucifer  pens  my  obituary….”He was spiritually weak”

 

Author's Note

Good vs Evil, me against both...

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh brother, can i relate to this...raised catholic, all those years with the nuns and the propaganda ---

pray for your friend who is lutheran because he won't be able to get to heaven...he is the wrong religion...ugh!

fear, obedience and other wonderful nouns to describe a religion of guilt...

i totally relate and agree with this write.

jacob

[Rob Santana]

Oh that must have been so confusing. Brainwashing academy. Thanks for reading.

[Caradoc]

Wow. Well written my friend. Some vivid imagery there. Makes me want to dust off one of my old acrostics and post it. That last part though, chilling.

-Caradoc

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much Caradoc. Your read and review means a lot bro. I would love to read your acrostic piece.

[Caradoc]

You're very welcome. I might post it a little later. Have a good one and keep it up.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is a great acrostic. And I don't say that often, it's not my favourite form, but you did it well.

[Rob Santana]

Wow that means a lot coming from you, thanks KL.

[Lyn Anderson]

You are very welcome, by the way, I reviewed this twice and only now noticed that it's should be its in the "its final cancellation". Amazing how easy those little things are to miss.:)

[Rob Santana]

It only took two years for someone to notice that, hahaha. Thanks KL.

[Lyn Anderson]

And of course, it would be ME. LOL.

[Rob Santana]

Hahahaha, of course!! Who else would it be.

[Natasha]

this poem could have turned out really cheesy, but your lines really drew away from that. enjoyed it a lot, and love your word usages

[Rob Santana]

Haven't seen you in a long time Natasha, nice surprise. Thanks for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed it. This is one of ma favourite pieces that I've written.

[Natasha]

Yes, I want to get back into poetry now and be more active in general on here! thanks for noticing!

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is a very thought provoking pen Rob.How would we fare in this battle of good and evil that rages in us all?

[Rob Santana]

We all battle with good and evil everyday. Thank you much V.....

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes that is the truth.You are very welcome Rob :)

[Pax]

your really good at this my friend, the battle of good & evil, you describe so well in your own views... Great!

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much Pax. Appreciate you stopping by.

[Akshay]

This is pretty brilliant, that's all.

[Rob Santana]

Hahaha, thank you very much.

[Black Star Adept]

Great Poem!!! Loved it, the ending was the best

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much Black Star. I will be visiting your work tonight after work. If you don't mind.

[Black Star Adept]

No problem, was a great read. I do not mind at all, please let me know what you think about it/them.

[A. Amos]

Great write and truly enjoyed the twist.. Good work my friend

[Rob Santana]

Appreciate your visit Amos. I will be doing some reading tonight. Hope you don't mind me stopping by.

[Rob Santana]

Appreciate your visit Amos. I will be doing some reading tonight. Hope you don't mind me stopping by.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome and take your time no worries