Spiritual Autopsy

G.O.O.D. V.S. E.V.I.L. (acrostic write #1) possible lyrics

Gathering  together  the  chosen  ones

Organizing  the  two  faced  holy  nuns

Oracles  regurgitating  obscene  incantations

Death  with  it's  final  cancellation

 

Venomous  words  invade  my  subconscious

Salvation, worship, obey or die

 

Erupting  with  dire  aggression eyes  filled  with  fire

Violent  images  received  through  voodoo  voyages

Insane  idolaters  performing  a  spiritual  autopsy

Lucifer  pens  my  obituary….”He was spiritually weak”

 

Author's Note

Good vs Evil, me against both...

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Wow, quite a read this one, powerful, provocative in reactions from the reader. As well as expressive in general. Direct and raw as well as dramatic. Just like Religion in general sometimes. Love or hate. This speaks volumes. Religion is a topic not many would speak against. I admire your bluntness and honesty. And this made me think and take note too.

[barleygirl]

Altho I find your critical judgment a little hard to stomach, I do relate to some of this message as being the reason I've never been able to get cozy with organized religion, even tho I consider myself a spiritual being. I think this is an understandable response to too much inundation in a judgmental form of religion. I take your author's note to be a sign that you are also against judgmental anything.

[Don't just B, but B ama..]

Total bad-assery! love the capitol letter message(acrostic), and the piece as well, a battle many struggle with. Also the title wicked, "Spiritual Autopsy" a cold piece indeed! Thanks for sharing. I can relate for my writing too reflects me battling my daemons.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you for reading. So glad this piece had some affect on you.

[ANTO]

I hope it doesnt end with Lucifer getting to pen your obit Rob
The battle lines drawn - you have the best intel - ergo you will prevail
An epic spiritual tapestry my friend

[Rob Santana]

I don't have the luxury of quitting Anto. I'm fighting till the bitter end. Thanks for stopping by my friend.

[ANTO]

God Bless you bro

[Sami Khalil]

The great battle between good and evil in a wonderful acrostic...Bravo......

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:).....

[Woody]

a very clever acrostic. I like this. the eternal fight between good and evil, if one believe in those things.
a really great one Rob.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you much Woody.

[Matching Socks]

Very cool acrostic Rob, can totally hear this as lyrics.
You need a wailing chorus, I can just hear it too!

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Ana. If I could only get my lazy self to do something with it.

[Layi Tate]

Wow.... I'm speechless . ...

[Rob Santana]

You ain't seen nothing yet........I send brutality in your direction. Prepare yourself......

[Layi Tate]

Lol I'm braced remember I asked for it ;)

[Rob Santana]

ask and you shall receive, lmao!!!

[Layi Tate]

:p you got me

[Baby Ricochet]

Great acrostic. I'm from the rural south so I got the southern baptist tradition growing up. According to the preacher we were all going to hell when the rapture came so we were damned if we did and damned if we didn't. I don't believe any of it now

[Rob Santana]

I don't believe in any of that either. Thanks for stopping by Baby.

[Dillon "Gerald" Steele]

Very creative and very moving and filled with emotion. The ending gave me chills, i just think the fact that you used Lucifer instead of say satan was very clever and a great use of that last line.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much Dillion.