Killer thoughts

Now I lay me down to sleep, and all these spirits start to creep...

When I lay myself down

The invasion of my mind begins

The darkness outlines

Evil grins

These evil spirits constantly

Pushing me to double up on my sins

Demons in my mind

Engraving thoughts of death

I can smell the devils acidic breath

Lucifer's on top of me

Doing the dance of death

With my eyes closed

I can see the cloaked one

Grab my wrist

I open my eyes

And see a black mist

Twisted disgusting thoughts

Of violent murders

Spill into my hemispheres

Spirits hovering above me

With bright golden eyes

Whispering amongst themselves

About my demise

I try to move

But I'm paralyzed

I try to scream

But I am mute

These entities

Continue to pollute

my mind

With images of me

Slaughtering 

My family

I suddenly hear a voice say

"Death and suicide are on your side"

These killer thoughts

Start to subside

My eyes get heavy

I finally fall asleep

Now

The 

Nightmares

Start to creep..

Author's Note

From real experiences. It's been many years since I've had encounters like this...

Reviews

[Salar Majak]

i love it!!!!! it's amazingly twisted, i loved the whole hovering death scene, it's like i'm the one who is in bed having these thoughts, it made me shiver XD good job!

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Aurora I really appreciate your read and review. After I read it a few times I was like damn what the hell is wrong with me,hahaha

[Salar Majak]

haha, you are welcome.nothing is wrong with you , it's demonicaly beautifulXD

[KAOlmsted]

Jesus Christ, never mind what's UNDER the bed, look the f**k out for what's IN the bed! O.O

Well-penned, as usual; those demons that dance in your head...pay them overtime, dude, they're working hard ;-)

Love it.

[Rob Santana]

LMAO!!! Actually I layed them off!!!!!!!!!

[KAOlmsted]

:-D (glad to hear that)

[ObscurityNone]

If this is honestly all occuring as you simply lay in bed... You should probably consider seeking out help, more so a guiding hand. Because frankly, all the heal, and soothe one needs is located solely in yourself. Irrefutably so.

[Rob Santana]

These are past experiences. But I do appreciate the read and advice.

[Raven Starhawk]

When I read this it reminded me of when I was a child and night time was always a dreaded event because that was when I would see things, even next to my bed, like shadow people and sometimes there would be growling like monsters or something. It would suck so much because not a night when by that something didn't happen. Even a chair next to my bed would rock back and forth. I can say that now I look back and still can't explain any of time, but anyways your poem reminded me of that. O_O I love your style.

[Rob Santana]

I've experienced those same growls myself for years.they would wake me out of my sleep.if not growls evil laughs. Thanks Raven.