Killer thoughts

Killer thoughts

A Poem by Rob Santana
"

Now I lay me down to sleep, and all these spirits start to creep...

"
When I lay myself down
The invasion of my mind begins
The darkness outlines
Evil grins

These evil spirits constantly
Pushing me to double up on my sins

Demons in my mind
Engraving thoughts of death
I can smell the devils acidic breath

Lucifer's on top of me
Doing the dance of death

With my eyes closed
I can see the cloaked one
Grab my wrist

I open my eyes
And see a black mist

Twisted disgusting thoughts
Of violent murders
Spill into my hemispheres

Spirits hovering above me
With bright golden eyes

Whispering amongst themselves
About my demise

I try to move
But I'm paralyzed

I try to scream
But I am mute

These entities

Continue to pollute
my mind
With images of me
Slaughtering 
My family

I suddenly hear a voice say
"Death and suicide are on your side"

These killer thoughts
Start to subside

My eyes get heavy
I finally fall asleep

Now

The 

Nightmares

Start to creep..

© 2014 Rob Santana


Author's Note

Rob Santana
From real experiences. It's been many years since I've had encounters like this...

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damn!! holy s**t now i am scared to sleep at night!! way to give nightmares!! its great i love the context but thats me just being messed up:) i can see the evil demons hovering and talking with their evil eyes! i just love it!!!:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

I'm glad you likes it
I don't want to have such nightmares. It's a nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Another tour into creeper's min
Liked it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thank you much Adam.
:) I'm entranced by this piece!!!!!! It's very dark and descriptive, and I love the imagery, the emotion, well the whole of it in all reality. Great work!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thank you Beth :)
Elizabeth Porterfield

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome:)
Night terror before the sleep begins :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow, this was really good, this is one I'll be keeping. I can relate believe it or not haha. Thanks for sharing this CREEPER!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Damien Davison

11 Years Ago

"I angrily push those thoughts out of my head
Than I hear a voice say "Death and suicide are o.. read more
Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

HAHA, I thought you'd might like this one. Thanks for the R&R.
i dont normally read this type of stuff but the way you write blows my mind
i love the flow great job

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Well penned imagery and good structure painting a nightmare.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

thanks Eric
Eric Cox

11 Years Ago

welcome
It's rare to see someone pull off morbid and dark and keep the poem rhyming. I could almost feel the dark tendrils coming off the screen with this. Job well done. ^_^

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
wow, this is just... really dark... I LIKE it. It brings me back to some of my nightmares.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on November 8, 2012
Last Updated on December 12, 2014
Tags: killer thoughts, mind never sleeps, evil spirits, attacked by demons


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