UNLEASHED

You're either on my side, or you're in my way

Can you see the emptiness in my life?

 

My mind does not function in a strictly

Logical, linear fashion

 

I've been trapped in a vicious circle,

 

I suffer from my own mental attacks,

 

I am the victim of my own mind,

 

But I'm not always aware of being a victim,

 

Why do I keep blowing on the embers

Of past pain and mistakes?

 

I no longer want to go unnoticed

 

Now, I cry out to the whole world

 

I AM HERE!!!!

 

I am a force to be reckoned with,

Are you ready for me?......

Author's Note

Time for me to achieve positive growth on a personal level.

Reviews

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Phoenix rising!

[Rob Santana]

Hell yeah,haha. Thanks for the friend request.

[Stanley Wilson]

good for you great poem!!

[Rob Santana]

Thanks Stanley :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I read confusion, anger and a vengefulness of a very dark nature within this piece. In actuality I read more of a helpless plea from a tortured soul. Very well written.

[Rob Santana]

Stamp 20 points on your hand right now,hahahaha,damn. anger,confusion,you got it right. Comes from a dark past.Just starting to deal with it now.Looking forward to reading your writings.Thank you for your comment.

[Lily Mae]

To be a victim of your own mind and cry out for the world to see you or hear you in warning is very powerful..xo

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Lily Mae, Im just starting to write so thank you for the motivation. It's time for me to be me and stopping trying to be what everyone else wants me to be. Hey? That sounds like a good poem right there,haha. thanks again.

[Lily Mae]

Yes.. go for it.. :)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

this poem is very good. You should be proud of it! It flows well and makes a statement about hourself . Well done, poet!

[Rob Santana]

I'am REALLY proud of this one. Thank you Kalypso.