UNLEASHED

You're either on my side, or you're in my way

Can you see the emptiness in my life?

 

My mind does not function in a strictly

Logical, linear fashion

 

I've been trapped in a vicious circle,

 

I suffer from my own mental attacks,

 

I am the victim of my own mind,

 

But I'm not always aware of being a victim,

 

Why do I keep blowing on the embers

Of past pain and mistakes?

 

I no longer want to go unnoticed

 

Now, I cry out to the whole world

 

I AM HERE!!!!

 

I am a force to be reckoned with,

Are you ready for me?......

Author's Note

Time for me to achieve positive growth on a personal level.

Reviews

[Eve Marie]

I can relate to this, I love it.

[Junert]

Hmmm

[Rob Santana]

Things that make you go .....hhmmm

[Frieda P]

I don't know, you scare me. lol...sure are ready for a voice to be reckoned with! Nice one...

[Rob Santana]

Hahaha, don't worry Frieda your not on my knee cap list, haha.

[Frieda P]

good thing, or I'd have to get Zio Luigi to fit you with some cement shoes lol ;-P

[Rob Santana]

Some concrete shoes, haha nah you and I are good. No need to sleep with fishes.

[Frieda P]

;-D Leave the gun, take the cannoli....

[Mark Anthony Games (Hum..]

(review for Change the World Comp)
This reminds me of my own work, especially 'Losing Balance'. What I love about this it that it is raw, honest and most importantly real. I could feel you shouting this out to the blind and deaf in your circle. I wanted to cry out to the world too, but then I relaised I had to do this to my self:

"I no longer want to go unnoticed
Now I cry out to the whole world
I AM HERE!!!!
I am a force to be reckoned with
Are you ready for me?......"

Great work, great bravery

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much.

[D.]

We all have a past for sure. Thanks for suggesting I read this. I'd say for sure, I can relate. Very talented.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you

[ValBonScallon]

Not bad as a catharsis. Hope it helped you achieve that growth!

[Rob Santana]

I've achieved growth, most definitely

[ValBonScallon]

Good :)

[Rob Santana]

I look forward to reading your books when I get home from work.

[ValBonScallon]

Thank you Sir. The Book with No Title is not as yet finished. The other is my repository for an empirical view on psychology, philosophy and the like.

[Mark Anthony Games (Hum..]

Brilliant, I am having a sneak preview through the competition entries, this is the first I saw. I think this month is going to be tough if the rest are this poweful

[Rob Santana]

Thank you for that H.V. I appreciate that.

[Stormy Weather]

Your own demons can be the biggest obstacle to overcome, but it is possible. I like this poem. It shows your strength.

[once upon a time]

I think this is really good. I can really sense a deep meaning in this. I think that this is extremely well written and i believe that you have a lot of writing talent. This definitely makes me want to read more of your writing.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you,for reading.

[fiery-san]

Another intense poem from you I see... it was nicely done. I could sense the inner awakening, of a person growing tired of being held back by the social norms and have decided to free himself from such ties... ready to take on the world. Awesome job. ^_^

[Rob Santana]

Thanks fiery-san this one here is my favorite.Means alot to me.