Don't leave

I think about you

day and night.

Sometimes you can

start a fight.

But then I think

what am I doing?

I need you.

You're all I think

about and want.

So what are

you waiting for?

Come to me!

Please don't leave!

Author's Note

This is for my sister. It's not about her, but she asked me to write a poem and I did!

Reviews

[Sseoni]

Aw, what a cute poem! I loved it! It was very well written, and very heart warming! :D

[Kerwin]

This is very sweet, and honest too!

[Jim Clarke]

I think it captures the essence of codependency. good job.

[poetic soul]

wow.. nice one.. the poem is a good start but the best is the love thats hangs behind in this creation for yo sis... amazing! :)

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Wildecat]

Sounds like you and your sister are very close. This is nice of you to write a poem because she asked you too. Nice job.

[JRB]

love holding hope,
Jan/uisiom

[SamBug]

See! You're getting it. Trust me, I wasn't good at writing when I started either. But you'll get the hang of it. My poems suck but I really liked this one. You did absolutely amazing doll. Thanks for dedicating it to me. I love you millions!

[John Stussy]

Never would have thought it was for your sister, has a lover's tone to it. Well written, good job on this piece.