Friends

Friends can suck sometimes.

Though the rose

In the bush

Is very beautiful,

That doesn't mean

It doesn't have thorns.

Though the cat

On the couch

Purrs softly, and sweetly

That doesn't mean

It won't claw you.

And though the bird

In the sky

Sings beautiful songs

That doesn't mean

It can't peck your eyes out.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[CJ]

yes, i know how that feels....good job on this write tho

[Justin Tobey]

I think that yes, friends can hurt you sometimes, but it's not something you should worry about too much if they're real, great friends that you feel a connection with.

I think you had some good points in this poem, and you displayed them well. It's a little dark for my taste, but the style is good. : )

[gemma]

omg THATS ME!!!!!!!!!!