Undiscovered

I was writing about what was on my mind...

At a park

By a lake

Under a bridge

In a forest

Memories await there

Hoping to be discovered

 

Reviews

[Raven: The Thought Hole]

OMG I LOVED THIS ONE... the statements lead up to the message... the only thing i'd suggest is..
instead of " Memories await there"
say Memories await" I know it kinda messes up the rhyme scheme, but i like it more. Great job!!!! People often underestimate the power and role of memories.

[Char]

:O

amazing! i love!

[Justin Tobey]

Beautiful! It's amazing how many images I got from a few simple words...

[Gavin Keary]

It is very short, but it says so much. Love it!