So, after reading some of the reviews I though it would be a good idea to explain a few things.
I wrote this poem after a really hard breakup about a year ago. I went through a time where I thought "I love you" can be the most dangerous words out there. You leave yourself vulnerable at that point, so easy to get hurt. So "I love you" can be as dangerous and any invitation for physical harm by a wild animal.
My Review
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I actually thought this was pretty good. The only problem I could find was that you misspelled "wandering" as "wondering" (I was confused for a minute there), but other than that, there were no mistakes. Good job!
I'm a sophomore in college, and I'm an English major, aspiring to be a high school English teacher. I'd love to use that at an outlet for my writing as well. I've been writing for a while, and I've ha.. more..