Jig Saw
A Book by Daisha
 It's a working progress. A thiller and suspense story.  © 2008 Daisha
Author's Note
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This is just the fist part. I wasn't sure you all would react. So if its popular enough i will continue. Thanks.
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You're off to a really good start! There were a few typos here and there, but I'm sure you'll catch those when you go back over it with a critical eye. I'm a sucker for a good crime thriller every time and this one seems promising. I actually wished you had written a little more so that I could get a better idea of where this is going. I'm really curious as to why the killer severed the body parts and left them at the scene instead of taking them. Keep up the good work!
Posted 16 Years Ago
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Added on May 29, 2008
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DaishaI'm from Los Angeles, but im in shallow Shreveport, LA
About
Hi I'm DAISHA
16 years of age.
Life is too short to try and blend in, so I choose to stand out.
Writing is my passion.
When things get so tense and hard, writing is my escape plan.
At one point I was .. more..
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