~Memory~

A Poem by J. Planet

Fragments of My Mind

~Memory~

Remember when

We were all Ten

And had again

What's always been.

Or if we Were

No Fear was there

To cause a Stir

Or be Elsewhere.

Because it's When

All Thoughts Occur

To say again

We're where we Were.

© 2008 J. Planet

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*~Poetic_Essence~*

Thats a bit of a tongue twister to say the last line..lol..but yea..i liked the feel of the poem..its short but it speaks volumes in such a few lines..i like that...'Fragments on my mind'

Posted 16 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Brenda Sue

Very cute. I enjoyed it very much. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*~Poetic_Essence~*

Thats a bit of a tongue twister to say the last line..lol..but yea..i liked the feel of the poem..its short but it speaks volumes in such a few lines..i like that...'Fragments on my mind'

Posted 16 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 5, 2008

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J. Planet

East Grease, RI, Vatican City

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Hello All. My Life is Based On a True Story. It shall reveal Itself in due Time. This is a New Account for Me, created on the New Leo Moon, in the Midst of a Transition in My Life at the moment. I.. more..