~Memory~

~Memory~

A Poem by J. Planet
"

Fragments of My Mind

"

~Memory~

 

Remember when

We were all Ten

And had again

What's always been.

 

Or if we Were

No Fear was there

To cause a Stir

Or be Elsewhere.

 

Because it's When

All Thoughts Occur

To say again

We're where we Were.

 

 

 

 

© 2008 J. Planet


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Thats a bit of a tongue twister to say the last line..lol..but yea..i liked the feel of the poem..its short but it speaks volumes in such a few lines..i like that...'Fragments on my mind'

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Very cute. I enjoyed it very much. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thats a bit of a tongue twister to say the last line..lol..but yea..i liked the feel of the poem..its short but it speaks volumes in such a few lines..i like that...'Fragments on my mind'

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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J. Planet

East Grease, RI, Vatican City



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