Began A World

As I dream under cold, black skies.

I've only began a world of you and I.

In a field of broken stems of love,

the tears of our lives force us to grow.

Twisting the roots of each other

up through a new generation.

As I dream under cold, black skies.

I've only began a world for you and I.

Reviews

[spunkyleo]

i like how this poem has many possible figurative meanings. for me, the figurative meaning is the love between mother and child. and you?

[Billy Sullivant]

Thanks! For me, the meaning is about two people who are like two dying plants and they combine and twist and grow, becoming inseparable.

[Trigorin]

The simplicity of this piece really works for it, I think. You use some good imagery here and the overall effect is very focused and calculated. Good work.