Friend

Friend, you're the one I keep

close to my heart.

You're the one I turn to

whenever I have to weep.

Friend, we share a bond

that the world can't break.

Friend, tell me. Will this bond

ever break or am I forever wrong?

To everyone I know and see

I have a gift that

I will always cherish.

For you will see my friend next to me.

Friend, together we are strong.

Together we bring harmony

and peace to ourselves.

Friend, in my heart, you will never be gone.

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad. The tone is appropriately solemn and while I think you could have used stronger imagery in places, overall this is fairly well-done.