This is...stunning! Every stanza is deep and rich in meaning and uniquely and beautifully painted. I believe the ones that don't stay, aren't suppose to. Something from them is all we are suppose to get. Aren't we all nomads to each other, really? This was amazing poetry :)
ohhhhhhhh now i remember why i am your #1 fan [though often we are like ships passing in the night], your words as metaphors reach deep to that place reserved only for solitude on rainy days. just grand, A. i tried to pick out a fave line, but each stanza shines in its own exclusive uniqueness. such an extraordinary poet are you.
your work is light to me, A. perhaps "soot" struck the deepest chord.
Did you know that there are some words possessed by lightness? They are hidden under hands, and sit on laps, patiently for all the weight of the world to fly away like birds, like wind, like sorrow, then they will show them selves. This was such a moving poem, show us your palms turned to the sky and we will read words possessed by lightness, all this harping won't do.