Sunset In The Tropics

Entry for Haiku Sunet Contest

Palms turn to shadow
Burning orb kisses the sea
A summer sunset

Author's Note

You couldn�t fathom how long it took me to arrange these words correctly... Blah...

Reviews

[Mr. Misanthrope]

Another truly wonderful haiku. You have really captured the grace and beauty of a sunset and put it on paper. This is one of my favourite poems of yours.

[L.V. Ana]

I know what you mean about arranging words...sometimes takes me forever.

I love this piece. Normally I don't like this style but this one's really good.

[rash]

this is nice.

[Kellius the Genius]

the poise of this Haiku you have created id original.
Nice

[Angel's Lady]

Nicely written, dear.
Poetically sound and all
You win at Haiku!

How's that? haha Sorry, amusing myself! Great job for real! And very visually beautiful! I enjoyed it!

[Astrid Hamilton]

I have much respect for the haiku and the poet who can master it.
You have done a great thing with words, and I curtsy to you in this beautiful breath
you have painted so vividly.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

I've never attempted a haicu they seem quite hard to do. This one is very nice. Well written. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Rambling Prose]

I most certainly can! (smiles)

Nicely done...