All is good

A poem about how all, daily things are good. Not necessarily everything though.

Many stop to think,

some rush through life.

Some go to movies,

some work.

Some find family time,

others waste time.

Some read a book,

many others play video games.

None of these things are bad,

none of these things are good.

All is good,

within reason.

Author's Note

Just a poem I whipped up, and of course somethings aren't good, what I mean in this poem are daily things.

Reviews

[DaughterNature]

I think your idea is great, but this poem doesn't do a good job of getting your point across. In another review I gave you, I mentioned showing rather than telling, and the advice is even more true here! Instead of telling your reader"some rush through life," SHOW us what you mean by describing such a person and his/her habits.

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

I really like this. I love short poem that have long meanings.
But I think the best thing is to stop and enjoy life. To stop and take in the scene and try to see the beauty of it all. Cause there is beauty in the ugliest of places. If you get what I mean.

[Ilerah]

Thanks for the review Kristan. And I agree, life is short so we should enjoy it.

[Riley Justine]

I like this! I just find it funny how you wrote some a bunch of times and then "many others" for video games XD.

[Ilerah]

Thought I would mix it up, and keep it true. Thanks for the comments Raven.

[GreenEyedPoet]

Nicely written piece llerah. :)

[Ilerah]

Thanks a lot Green.

[Emily]

I like this one!
Well done!
Keep it up!!

[Ilerah]

Thank you Emily.

[AaronFreitas]

Nice write... we do rush through life... sometimes we get so much done in a day and somedays are wasteful. But at least they are our days to choose what to do :)

[Ilerah]

Thanks for the review again Aaron.