The Last Working DayA Story by Ike L. ObidikeThe near-fatal event of a veteran cop's last working day.Inspector
Mazibuko was in high spirits as he drove to work for the very last time. His
office was holding a party that evening to honour him for his thirty two years
of exemplary service to the police force. He sang along to the gospel tune playing
in his car stereo. He felt fulfilled. He
turned off the major street
and into the desolate dirty road that was a short cut to his station. Further
up the short road, he picked up a
group of people huddled together in suspicious posture. He stopped singing and
sat up in his driver’s seat, deftly turning the stereo’s knob clockwise, killing
the music. He drove slowly past the group and saw
a smallish woman trapped
by four mean looking men. Eight
fierce eyes
peered at him menacingly. He had been long enough in the force to know
immediately that a mugging was in progress. For
a second or two, Inspector Mazibuko considered his options. He could drive
quietly to work and collect his prizes and retire in relative peace at the end of his shift but
the fear in the old woman’s eyes stuck in his mind. He knew it would lodge
there even long after his retirement. He
looked through his side mirror and gauged that the group was about 100 meters behind
him. Altruism overtook concern over personal safety. Instinctively,
he patted his service pistol
on his waist for
reassurance. He spun his car in a screeching u-turn and raced towards the
bedazed criminals as the smell of burning rubber trailed his dash. Noticing the
presence of their unwanted
guest,
the crooks turned to look at the car approaching them at high speed. Their
options were not many. Inspector
Mazibuko swerved towards the pavement and jumped out of the
car in one swift
movement. The open door covered most part of his body except his head and the cocked
gun that pointed at the criminals menacingly. “Hands
in the air,” he shouted in his cultured stern voice. All
four criminals ran off with one of them grabbing the woman’s handbag. Inspector
Mazibuko gave chase. He enjoyed chasing criminals because they always assumed
that they would outrun the old madala in
uniform. They eventually realize their error of judgmental shortly into the
deadly race. Inspector Mazibuko hadn't been a 12 times winner of the Gauteng marathon race for nothing. At the intersection, the crooks scattered
in different directions. Undeterred,
he pursued the one clutching the handbag. When
the target criminal realized that
he was rapidly losing ground, he dropped the handbag and disappeared. Inspector
Mazibuko stopped and holstered his pistol. He picked up the handbag and
returned it to the petrified woman. She
was not a day less than seventy. She thanked her uniformed rescuer as she
collected her handbag. She was shaking like a Jacaranda leaf caught up in a
windy maelstrom. Inspector
Mazibuko offered to drop her at the nearest bus stop and she went towards the
passenger’s door. He
bent to unlock the driver’s door when three shots rang out and shattered the
relative dullness that was a part of the landscape of such empty dead ends.
His head hit the car roof as he fell forward. He slumped and
lay sprawled face down on the dirty asphalt road. The
old woman screamed. A
white golf with three occupants sped past and disappeared at the end of the
road. The
old woman ran to him and raised his head from the floor and looked into his
closed eyes. She cradled his head and scanned the road but there was no soul in
sight. Tears streamed down her cheeks from hollow grey eyes
as the old woman wept bitterly. She placed her handbag that the lifeless man just recovered from the criminals on the road and lowered Inspector Mazibuko’s head on top of it. She stood up and looked up the road, wondering where she could go for help. She took two tentative steps and stopped as she heard some ruffling noise behind her. She turned and opened her mouth in a whimper of stifled scream. The old woman fainted. Inspector
Mazibuko leant on his car for support
as he rubbed his swollen forehead, bent at the waist. He straightened up to steady
himself as three spent bullets fell off his back with a clinking noise on the
asphalt road. Inspector Mazibuko patted his uniform and the bulletproof vest
underneath before
he took his mobile phone to summon help from his colleagues at the Orange Grove Police Station. © 2011 Ike L. ObidikeFeatured Review
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5 Reviews Added on June 24, 2011 Last Updated on July 15, 2011 AuthorIke L. ObidikeLondon, Europe, United KingdomAboutI have been writing articles since 1994 but got into fiction writing in 2003. I have published my debut novel, Shifting Sands in Smashwords, a literary fiction. more..Writing
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