On Pain of DeathA Story by juliusI
wish that I didn’t have to cover this. But I do. To raise awareness. Liam
Brown was a great kid. Everyone says the days are darker now without his smile.
He wasn’t too bright, but he was amazing at building things. He was a creative,
energetic, compassionate young man, full of love and life. We never expected
what happened. An officer questioned Jonas about Liam. This was weeks
after it happened, but Jonas was still very shaken up over it. He came in
several times a week for four weeks, and this is the story we managed to piece
together. With the consent of Liam’s mother, we will release this to the public
as a warning. To everyone. I have modified the account to make it more
readable, but tried to stay true to the facts. It was just another school night for Jonas. He had
homework he needed to do, but he was procrastinating. He knew that he wouldn’t
get his work done in time, but that had happened before. He just really didn’t
want to do it. Tv was more important. Sometime in between 6:00 and 8:30, Liam
tried to FaceTime him. Jonas declined. He didn’t want anything to disrupt his
show. After Jonas’ show was over, he had the Hot Pocket his mom had left on the
kitchen counter for him. After dinner and an hour more Tv, Liam tried to
FaceTime again. Frustrated, Jonas declined again. Shortly after, he got a text
from Liam that read, ‘We need to talk. NOW.’ Jonas responded, ‘Y.’ (That’s it.
Just Y. If he had said more, Liam might have been saved. I feel bad for saying
this, but it’s hard not to blame Jonas. I know he has a hard time not blaming
himself.) Liam replied, ‘I knew you wouldn’t care. No one does. Never mind.
Goodbye.’ Jonas got worried. Goodbye? What did he mean, goodbye? Won’t I just
see him tomorrow? Jonas decided to call him, and went to his room to have some
privacy. He thought he was prepared for the worst. We all wish he had been. As the image came into focus, the first thing he noticed
was that Liam was in a car. He could tell that Liam had been crying. In fact,
he still was. He asked Liam what was going on. Liam said something along the
lines of ‘You hate me. Everyone hates me. All I do is annoy people, make them
upset. It would be better if I were just gone.’ Jonas
realized what was happening, but too late. Liam was in his garage with the car
on, gassing himself. Liam’s parents weren’t home. It seemed like they never were.
Jonas told him to stop, that he had too much to live for. ‘Like what?’ Liam
said. Jonas had no answer. ‘What
about your parents?’ He asked. ‘If they loved me they would want to see me.’
Jonas was silent. Liam started crying harder. Jonas offered to call someone to
help. Liam bent over and the image lagged. For a split second, Jonas thought
that Liam had died. Suddenly, the image came back. Liam had a gun to his head.
‘If you call someone, I’ll pull the trigger.’ ‘Don’t!’ Jonas yelled. ‘Don’t
what?’ His mother called from the living room. ‘Nothing,
Mom,’ he yelled. While he had his head turned, he heard a gunshot. A wave of
despair swept over him. He knew Liam had died. He could barely make himself
look back to the screen. ‘If
you talk to anyone else, the next shot is going through my head,’ Liam
asserted. Jonas was relieved that Liam wasn’t dead, but
still worried that he would be soon. ‘I want you to live. I guess I was just a
bad friend. I failed, and I’m sorry. Please forgive me. You might think your
death won’t hurt anyone, but it will. Everyone will be hurt.’ Liam lowered the
gun just a hair. ‘You mean that?’ ‘Yes, of course I do. You’re my only friend.
If you died, I would die. Do you want that?’ ‘I guess not…’ The gun went a little lower.
Liam dropped the gun and grabbed his head. ‘It hurts!’ He yelled. ‘How long have you been in there?’ Jonas asked
frantically. ‘I-I don’t know, since the second time I tried
to FaceTime you, I think.’ Jonas checked the time. That had been 15 minutes
ago. ‘How are you not dead!?’ He asked. ‘I don’t know. I wanted to die. Please call
someone, I can’t feel my legs…’ his voice started to drift off as the carbon
monoxide took effect. Jonas ran to his home phone and dialed nine one one. He
realized that he didn’t know Liam’s address. He panicked. They told him not to.
This is where the story starts to get blurry. It was hard
for Jonas to talk about it. From what we can tell, Liam passed out, the
emergency responders traced the call to Liam’s phone, and found him. Jonas
watched the whole affair over FaceTime. He heard when the firefighters broke
through the front door. He watched the garage door open to a dark, starless
night. He was startled when the glass in the car door suddenly broke. The men
opened the door and dragged Liam’s body out of the car. Jonas saw his first,
and hopefully only, dead body. We aren’t sure how long he had been dead, just
that he was dead when the firemen showed up. Jonas spent weeks crying into his mother’s shoulder. He
didn’t talk for a week after Liam died, he just cried. He took voluntary
therapy. I was his therapist. I’ve spent the past six months telling him that
it wasn’t his fault, that there was nothing he could have done, and that since
Liam was a Christian, he was in a better place. Jonas became a Christian as
well. That was the only good thing that came from this long, bitter affair. Was
it worth it? I would say no, but God might think differently. No matter how much I tell Jonas that it wasn’t his fault,
I’m not sure if I can make myself believe it. He could have saved Liam, but he
was ignorant and unprepared. It still hurts me to think that Liam believed that
I didn’t love him. If I had known, I would have taken as many days off as I had
to. I guess that I am as much to blame as Jonas. If anyone who reads this plans to commit suicide,
remember the people that you will hurt. Jonas hasn’t been the same since Liam
died. Neither have I. Remember who you leave behind. Remember the people who
love you. Remember those who will miss you. I know I’m not Shakespeare, but I
hope this can persuade you to change your mind. © 2017 julius |
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