In my head

In my head

I can see his face

see his smile

feel his embrace

 

In my head

he's right here with me

hes not far away

he didnt leave

 

In my head

he wont be gone long

he wont find another

he'll see he was wrong

 

I wish that all

my dreams would come true

And that whats in my head

would be in his too

 

Reviews

[Corey Lunare-]

dreaming of you. The peson we all want to have and hold but doesn't fee he same way towrds you back. Sad, yes but we hide behind the "there's someone out here for everone" card as always. I love this peice because it is simply about what all of us feel towards someone and hey imply don't feel the same way in return. It makes e sad though...great job nevertheless! Keep it up!

[M_S_Lay]

I have read simple poems before and been turned away by the way that they try to reach above their own grasp and shove way too much into just a few lines.

You didnt do this. I loved this sad little poem
well done

[JP thinks the WC is apt..]

A simple, succinct and melancholy piece!

[N3v3r_2_L@t3]

Awww...that was deep, lol. I liked this poem alot. I love how you can fit a whole story line into just a couple of stanzas. It was really short, but i got the meaning loud and clear. I think you did a wonderful job =] Keep up the good work