Waking up on an unknown world is not a nice feeling.
The year is 49 D.M. (Deus Mori), and a once peaceful, war-free planet Earth has been laid waste by unexplained celestial events ...
I'm open to criticism as brutally constructive as anyone who knows their stuff is willing to give. I'm a writing student, so I'm looking to refine my work as best I possibly can. Professional criticism is heartily appreciated.
Thanks for reading!
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Love the story and it left me wanting for more.
It’s fast paced, visual and never boring. Your tags are definably on target.
Please continue the story and don’t forget to send me a read request when you do.
See I’m optimistic, when not if.
Interesting story, good grasp of grammar and the likes and definitely worth continuing. A story that is unlikely to fall apart due to thoughtlessness on the behalf of the author-- surprisingly rather rare to see for me. Do continue!
I'm 20 years old and I'm a writing student living in Hawaii. Writing is my passion, and I'm striving to break into the market doing something I really love. more..