Summary

Demystification
at this i am well versed
I search the sky for Venus
but Mars always finds me first

And all that is before me
is my adversary
for when you are God
all you see is the Devil

Reviews

[pal]

Short and sweet. Wonderful write.
Pal

[Allan Eddings]

What a powerful piece! Echo though I do the chorus plaudits, it does not make it any less true. I will leave aside my own interpretation of your words, for I fear they will be different to your intentions. I will say instead that this piece is a symmetrical nexus of power most portentous, and mayhap you see in it the end of power so splendid, in a moment a twinkling all utterly ended? No? Alas I fear my own interpretations have crept in. In any event, this is sublime.

Thank you,
A.E.

[Different Wings]

Love the references and contrast within those- and def the first two lines.

[.]

what a powerful piece..capturing an intensity in just a few lines...outstanding..

[Linear]

Love the flow, it's strange how that for which we search, is often that which we discard, in our rush to become that which we already are.

[Michael X]

Wow, I can't even begin to fathom the depths your words flow into.
bringing together elements of divinity and blance in opposition.
this is written with an amazing scope to celestial ponder. excellent.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

mystical beauty threaded through elemental divinity~
how true your words do ring~

[Frank F. Atanacio]

wow-- let me use plain English--this was a kick-a*s write...