A Fool Defeated by Love

Code Version:

(Evil) has many ways (o)r certain ends
To (k)il(l) (a) m(a)n in un(r)equited love's
(Dis)gr(a)ce and unforgi(v)ing titan winds
Th(a)t (b)l(o)w away his pride. He wants to pro(ve)
A god, but ultimately, he will f(all)
(A)nd suffer in this (l)owly mort(a)l (s)tate.
E(mo)t(io)ns and pri(d)e will never set well
When al(l) he doe(s) is da(m)n his (e)mpt(y) (f)ate.
Heart(ache)s are guaranteed, and (it)s (em)pty
(F)eeling wi(ll) surely br(ing) (a)n end to life
As known (to) one who thought that love was free
And not (s)ubject (t)o (h)ate's (i)mmortal knife:
A(lone), a victim hid from all, my soul's
(Nothingness) is all that is pure and whole.


Regular Version:

Evil has many ways or certain ends
To kill a man in unrequited love's
Disgrace and unforgiving titan winds
That blow away his pride. He wants to prove
A god, but ultimately, he will fall
And suffer in this lowly mortal state.
Emotions and pride will never set well
When all he does is damn his empty fate.
Heartaches are guaranteed, and its empty
Feeling will surely bring an end to life
As known to one who thought that love was free
And not subject to hate's immortal knife:
Alone, a victim hid from all, my soul's
Nothingness is all that is pure and whole.

Author's Note

This poem has a hidden message within it. It contains linked anagrams and putting the letters together will spell something out. I will put a () parenthesis around the words that contain the letters and separate letters that spell the hidden message. See if you can decode the msg. Trust me when I say, this code is hard to break. I will also put two versions (one with the parenthesis, and one withouth it) so it can be easier to read. *note some letters will need to be rearranged around within the lines.

Reviews

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Wow, I'm going to have fun with this one decoding it! A great read none the less :3

[realmwriter]

I will get back to you on this one when I break the code...!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

to leave decoded is to defeat the purpose, although my purpose is not to sooth!