Love Inside My Dreams

Inside my dreams, I've looked into your eyes
Ten thousand times, and tracing every hue
Of blue, my heart will only fall and rise
When I am next to you and only you.
Your crimson strands of hair still brush my face
When I'm awake and you are far away.
Only at night can I feel your embrace
That I long for all through the cursed day.
I close my eyes, and in my dreams, you swoon
Inside my arms, dancing eternally
Under the rays of Autumn's midnight moon,
Then, on the grass, lay your head next to me.
Inside my dreams, I know you will remain
Until I wake into Life's hellish plane.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

"Inside my dreams, I've looked into your eyes ten thousand times, and tracing every hue
of blue, my heart will only fall and rise when I am next to you and only you."

A poem on reflections of times of old.

Reviews

[Fragilebrokendreams]

That is so beautiful, if only the past we miss could remain forever.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

unrequited love......beautifully written

[realmwriter]

In my dreams Im always with my love. Then I have to wake up and shes gone. I catch myself daydreaming of her all the time and then i have to wake up. So sad! Makes ones heart ache!

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

So sweet, yet so sad at the same time.

"Inside my dreams, I know you will remain
Until I wake into Life's hellish plane."
Favorite two lines. For the reason that both make you wonder. Each dream has to be awoken from, and it's always to something that more unpleasant than friendly. Well it is like that if you're like some people. That's how I see it.

Imagery is as well great in this piece, and it flows well as well as spot-on rhyming.

-Marie-

[Lily Mae]

Very beautfiul.. :) xx