From the Most Sensitive Corner of My Heart

The most sensitive corner of my heart
Is tainted with the stain of your embrace,
A treasured bliss and yet it tears apart
My soul from unrequited love's disgrace.
Cast out and neglected from an empire
Built just for two in Edenic retreat,
I'm left alone with a wanting desire
That this poor heart is not meant to defeat.
Now cast aside as just a memory
That time will surely fade to nothingness,
I know I'll be alone eternally
In the corner of my heart's emptiness.

I know my heart shall never be the same
When all I feel is agony and pain.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

A heartfelt sonnet that truly describes hopelessness. It was very easy to write. It's been a really bad day.................

Reviews

[Fragilebrokendreams]

its well done, I cant help but feel ever so sad for this speaker

[Tasha]

I hope your day has gotten better, this was very powerful. Wonderful write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

a owerful explosion of feared thought and guided pretens, you show great courage with the word, well done

[RedInk524]

Strong, full of emotion, and gripping. Your poems always did have such a mournful touch.

[rwar ish me]

very nice. its so strong and powerful. I simply love it and its just so wow like rene says.

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

/: Just, wow. Alan. Wow. That poem speaks for itself. . There's so much despair it feels like it's pouring out. . . I don't have anything else to say. Only that this poem really wrenches the heart.