Tsutsuga's Conquest

(This is what the true Tsutsuga looks like, below)

 

 

I was a fool with hopes and dreams
That fell apart and can't redeem
My mind, My pride, my heart, my soul
That's now left broken and hollow.


Tear me apart, tear me in two,
There's nothing left to catch your view.
This simple man is but a stone;
Rigid outside; inside, alone.


My dreams of love, of happiness,
Have left me with this emptiness
That never leaves, though try I may,
I face this pain with every day.


Inside my eyes, inside my mind,
There's only thoughts of days behind.
'What could have been? Could I do more?
Why did I lose what I adored?'


My loves, my life, my family,
Have only caused this agony
That burns inside my mind (my hell)
Where there, it stays, and always dwells.


This crazy fool took everything
The world gave, but couldn't bring
Himself some peace along the way
And find the light of a new day.


A pawn, a game, a simple tool
The world carved and made its fool;
I have no name, identity,
To call my own, just 'misery.'


And now, I've yet to find myself.
I placed my heart upon a shelf
So I could never be broken
By words not known, still unspoken.


Oh great red beast, devour me
For all of time, eternity,
Inside that mirror you keep near
And lock me there; please keep me dear.


A fate alone, outside of time
Is what I need to clear my mind
With the tsutsuga, my true friend,
And make this all come to an end.

Reviews

[Calypso]

Amazing poem. Truly full of emotion. You told a story here and it was a powerful one. I wonder if the red beast is the monster inside of us all?

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A bright and almost tendered magical piece, well done, good read.

[Lily Mae]

A soul eater.. gathering all the disappointment and pain and moving on.. But to what? An endless circle? :) You've made me curious with this.. I love it..x

[☯]

An emotional and descriptive poem. I felt the feeling and words flow as I read. The thoughts of success and hope.
"A pawn, a game, a simple tool
The world carved and made its fool;"
Amazing write :)

[Spiral Panda]

"I've yet to find myself.." I hope you succeed how you want to when it shows face. In the meantime you're still enduring journey after journey that helps shape your pace. Even if at the end of each path you're unknown to you, soon enough the answers will all or most be revealed.