Somehow, I Can Never Leave Your Side

There are times that when you care about someone so much, you can never stop thinking of them, no matter how many times they hurt you.

Those azure eyes, staring into my soul,
Shall bring about my painful, youthful death
As you beg me to never let you go,
Though you curse me with every taken breath.
You want me near, yet tell me I can't stay,
Casting aside what love you felt for me;
And as I look into your eyes, I say
That love has cursed me for eternity.
My heart is but a toy you wish to break,
Yet I, somehow, can never leave your side.
When I look in those azure eyes, they take
My heart and soul and fill them all inside
With hopes and dreams of love to be with you
Though I know well they can never come true.

Reviews

[Kayla K]

You're poems are always so filled with emotions, and that's what I like about them. You can tell that, at least I believe, you're writing about someone you care about, because each word you write (or in this case type) is so full of love. Whoever the person is that you care this much about is very lucky, because it's obvious you truly do care.

Great poem. I love it =)

[Sourav]

Very passionate and emotional write. The poem has a good flow and it's a well constructed one.

[WynterPhoenix]

"My heart is but a toy you wish to break," I love this line! I'm not sure if that makes me strange or whatever, but I was never accused of being normal. Anyway, great write!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

a fierce wall of battle against those sober on reality, a tempting prose, well done

[Aleyah]

I love this :) I like how you repeat "azure"...it's striking. This poem poses a mood that's a little whimsical...it's also, of course, melancholy. Very fluid, beautiful piece :)

[Lily Mae]

Another beauty..x