Speechless

I have no words to say to you.  My heart

Is broken and scattered: never to mend
Or heal these pieces you have torn apart
And threw away into the gust of wind.
Into the breeze, all of my hopes and dreams
have gone away and shall never return.
Though try I may to beg, plead, and redeem
Myself to you: your love, I never earn.
You were my hope and reason to live for
And now I hide behind this darkened mask.
Let me but hold you in my arms once more
And I shall do whatever you may ask.
     Until that day, in darkness I shall hide

     Until your heart is where I shall reside.

Reviews

[Fabric Pulse]

=/ I really hope this stuff starts getting easier on you.

[Kayla K]

First off, it was a perfectly written piece. Secondly, I feel like I can relate to it so much. You penned these emotions and feelings so precisely.

[Lily Mae]

Perfect, I know if I received this poem I'd not hesitate... so well written :) xx

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A trusted style, a lovely flowed pieced.

[☯]

Wow, very emotional and deep. I like the way you used the hope and fate. Also, the last two lines:
"Until that day, in darkness I shall hide
Until your heart is where I shall reside."
were my favorite :) Great write!