The Sun and the Moon

The Sun and the Moon are locked in an eternal dance of love.

I love thee more than the sun loves the moon
When he sets in the West, gazing in bliss
Upon his love that holds him while he swoons
Under the breath of her sweet, honeyed kiss.
I love thee more than the moon loves the sun
As she bathes upon his gold, stellar light,
Embraced in arms until the day is done
When she can hold her love all through the night.
I love thee more than you shall ever know;
For simple words can never dare reveal
The depths of love that live within my soul,
Yearning to show just how I truly feel.
For you, my dear, my love will always burn;
Like flames to wicks, that wicks do always yearn.

 

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

The unrequited love of the sun and the moon... I so love this one.. You capture the magic of the two passing in the night and day with whispers of yearning being sung through the universe.. :) love it..xx

[Fabric Pulse]

"The wicks always do yearn..." That they do! What I find...what's the word...irrisistable?..about your word flow is how intense it is, it's like being in quicksand, but of voluntary service free will choice in the sinking. You provoke a painting of such lonely wilderness but with a gleam of that escape glam. Somehow, you pull off creating these old fashioned titles and rhyme functions and they work amazingly well where as if it was anyone else as a writer they'd never be able to make it work in such a manner. You were meant for this, for bringing back the 'old school' and teaching us that it's the new trend. This just goes to prove how you're a rare gem stone.