Fight Spells 3

I feel as if 

I'm chasing your

Ghost

Through lines

And lines of 

Telephone cords

Making direct paths

in digital impressions

Forged out of

serapic memory

Left prone

To the unsoundness

of our love.

Reviews

[Steven]

I can feel the ache in the memories of this lost love. The imagery of so many lines of telephone cords tangled upon themselves as an allegory of the miles of pain in separation, both physical and emotional, is powerful... Write more.

[Poetic Beauty]

When you argue over distance or the phone it makes it harder to patch things up. It makes it more difficult and harder to deal with. You have expressed these thought clearly in this poem.